Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Golden sunsets and black storms

11/23/2006 07:47 pm
i already like lawson...lol...great chapter...i think he's gonna prove to be a good ally against angelus, yeah? and i feel bad for tara, being so deceived by willow..great chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:12 am
CH 48 - I love Lawson - already love em - he rocks!

Loving this chapter - I hope everyhing works out well for everyone - I am so emotionlly involved with all these characters you wrote - they are great at pulling out my emotions and twisting me in suspense - gret job!

Verda
07/03/2006 01:19 am
My bad. Was a might confused about Sam...as in Sam Lawson. Sorry, was really tired when I read it. Feelin' the walls closing in on Willow. So eager to continue reading this wonderful story.

Ka-ris
05/06/2006 09:35 pm

your story has inspirted the poet in me, a single line gave me the base of a poem.
not sure it si any good, and so I would give you words far better than mine.

The sages say,
Happyness and sorrow are one,
Is this because in finding the first,
We also discover the second?
--Suzume-No-Kumo (1861)

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 01:16 am
Ooo ... loved this chapter. Kristen went back to her own time ... the spell will hopefully be broken ... Willow will be in big doo doo ... Everyone will remember ... Oh yes ... I am getting happier by the sentence.

vladt
02/03/2006 09:42 pm
good update to very entertaining fic. thanks

Richard
01/30/2006 01:21 am
'good word' :p

A few typos left but I can't bemoan this when you use such wonderful words.

I like the progression. Nice and slow and natural.

I wonder what's happening to Tara. I'd think Willow's aura would grate on her nerves.

Judy
01/29/2006 01:08 pm
Just keeps getting better and better. Love this fic.

Unholydragoon
01/27/2006 10:33 pm
How's this for a good word: I am liking this story more than I thought I could. Keep it up!

Eve
01/26/2006 05:50 pm
WOW...I just finished reading the whole story up to this point and I am blown away by the amazing story you've woven and the way you so lovingly portray the characters. I will be keeping up with new updates from now on! THank you so much for sharing your writing talents with us!!
EveTavitha -at- earthlink -dot- net

Sarah
01/26/2006 04:33 pm
Yay Lawson! I don't see enough of him in fanfic; and I thought the idea of a vampire with half a soul was really neat. I'm glad he's decided to join up with Spike. Keep the updates coming!

01/26/2006 04:18 pm
Great update! I love how you have the characters true to form and I can't wait to see what happens when the spell is broken! Please update soon!

Pin
01/26/2006 03:52 pm
Great chapter. I really love that you've brought back Lawson and I am totally intrigued by Kristen. I hope that she has achieved what her time travel set out to do. Thanks for the great story. Looking forward to more.

01/26/2006 01:39 pm
Very interesting stuff with Kirsten! I hope Dawn is going to be ok now! Oh, I can't wait for the spell to be broken... Willow is going to be in deep shit!!!

dramaqueen
01/26/2006 01:39 pm
More please. Yours is one of the best stories and I eagerly anticipate the next installment!

LeeAnne
01/26/2006 05:34 am
Hi...just wanted to say how much i absolutely love this story...i am very much in awe of your writing talent...i find myself entranced by every word, deed, action, character that is in this story...i anxiously look forward to another chapter....keep it coming!

01/26/2006 04:58 am
Are the Watchers and Faith going to break the spell now? Will Lawson offer to help Spike fight Angelus? So much in this wonderful story. Thank you so much for the new chapter.