ok, im reading this fic straight through and wasnt planning on commenting until the end... but that last line of solum's was sooo frickin hilarious, i just had to review to say so. cuz like, there's all this hot, spuffy goodness and all of a sudden, BAM! humor. that is just a great line!!!!!
~liz

LMAO - the last line was absolutly perfect - great update - great story! I am really enjoying this and can't wait to see where youtake it!

“Man, I sure need to get me one of them mortal enemies.”

Everyone does man, every one :P

excellent chapter. plot can be somewhat overrated. thanks for the fun.

ROFLMAO ! That last line was hilarious. This whole chapter was steaming hot. {fanning herself} Darn fine writing. Let the plot stay hidden. LOL. Although I still felt it was plot building and character building in the chapter. {Smiles}

One mortal enemie for me to please, Oh and Super Size it!

Yikes! Have just caught up with this again and am loving it! For someone who thinks they don't write good sex scenes, well, I just wanna be around when you have one you're happy with 'cos that was way good enough for me!

So looking forward to more. Thanks ever so.

lol! loved that last line! and omg, that was hot! *fans herself and passes out as well*

Oh Hot Dang! That was just...I need a smoke and I don't smoke. I blame you...excuse me because i musnt now go awaken my mortal enemy...

god damn that was funny!! that last line, I mean. I love this fic!! feel free to not find your plot for a while because you do good work without it. But, if you should happen to come across my brain in your search, please send it home. It's been missed.

That was way HOT!!! if you cant find your plot, then pray continue and write another sexy hot chapter instead.

Great chapter -hot,hot sex and finishing with a funny.

I thought it was hot...

LOL! I love Solum.

Nice scene. Very detailed. And your transitions in Buffy's thinking were very good, particularly in the first part of the chapter.

Yeah I'm with Solum....sure could do with a mortal enemy ;)

So when the plot gets lost just go with the smut, well I'm not complaining :)

wow. that was so amazing. just absolutely amazing.
keep up the great work!

WHEW!! We all need mortal enemies like that. Gotta go smoke now.

Kyra, dear, if that was disjointed and unsmooth.... All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! Here's a carrot to lure the plot bunny out. Maybe you should wing them back to Sunnyhell and write some Scooby reaction to Buffy being missing. Might help the other bunnies come together.