Cycle of Rebirths by weyrwolfen
Chapter: Mortal Enemies

Niamh
07/09/2006 05:12 am
And the juxtaposition of their unfolding stories is wonderfully crafted. There's no hesitation, no misstep, notthing out of place. This is how to write stories.
I can't begin to tell you how flattered I am by this post. I love your fics, so this means a lot to me. Thank you!

03/04/2006 06:52 pm
Oh I LOVE it- that's so perfect! And I also think the way you have the past running backwards and the present running forwards is a really inspired idea that gives the fic something really interesting and different. This story truly is amazing. I love it :]:]
When I was outlining this story, I was so worried that the seperate timelines, with one running backwards, would really throw people. I'm always happy to hear otherwise. Thanks!

vladt
03/04/2006 12:16 am
very good read. thanks. giles can be so dense.
For such a smart guy, yeah, Giles can be pretty clueless. Thanks for the feedback!

03/03/2006 09:19 pm
I see attento-girl is still living in Egypt along with her watcher and "friends." I want Spike to go, pick up that sword and show them all who it really belongs to at this time. More story please.
But DeNile is such a pretty, scenic place. You won't have too long to wait for the wake-up call you're wanting. Never fear. Thanks for the review!

03/03/2006 05:27 pm
one word....awesome!!!
i love japanese culture and i study the samurai. hell i even want to live in japan so this story is right up my alley. can't wait for more.
You'll have to catch me if I write about something blatently wrong. ;-) I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for the review!