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Belonging by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Monsters and Men
05/14/2006 12:03 am
Well after the many hints I'm not surprised at what Riley's men were doing. Poor Buffy, living so long in denile. At least now she's willing to do something about it.
it should have been clear from the chapter where julian was introduced...but now buffy knows and she'll be able to do something :)
03/06/2006 11:18 am
That is horrible - I can't wait for the iniatiave and riley to go down... I am so scared for riley to find them and try to take spike away from her... I just hope he dies horrible like. What a wonderful and gripping chapter!
and again :)
03/06/2006 11:18 am
That is horrible - I can't wait for the iniatiave and riley to go down... I am so scared for riley to find them and try to take spike away from her... I just hope he dies horrible like. What a wonderful and gripping chapter!
riley will pay i promise...thanx so much for your kind words!!
Bridget
03/05/2006 10:59 pm
Good updates. I hope that Riley will get what is coming to him.
trust me he definitely will in time :)
pretty_in_fangs
03/05/2006 11:10 am
Oh my. I just found this story and just spent a very emotional evening ready everything you've written so far. You write so poingiantly. It's beautiful. Painful, but beautiful.
thank you so much...what a compliment!! I appreciate your comments!! glad you are enjoying it :)
03/05/2006 02:44 am
Ah - this explains the newly revealed forcefulness in Tara's character. Can't wait for more.
doesn't it?? i got mad about this chapter and i wrote it!! thanx for review :)
Lou
03/04/2006 11:24 pm
About bloody time too!! It's only taken 38 chapters, love.
lol...yep, about time she went into major slay-mode, isn't it? but who wouldn't after hearing that, right? :) thanx for great review!
ComedyofErrors
03/04/2006 10:39 pm
Moving along smoothly.
thanx :)
Nikkole
03/04/2006 09:03 pm
Very good, although disturbing, chapter. I can see that being exactly what would happen. I can't wait for the next chapter.
thanx...it was meant to be disturbing...thanx for review :)
PyroChilde
03/04/2006 05:30 pm
Well its about damn time she figured it out. Poor Julian!!! Please tell me she's going to kick some soldier ass?
definitely!! thanx for review :)
Nemo
03/04/2006 12:05 pm
I'm so glad Bufy is realizing the truth, I think it was good for her to hear what her husband had been up to. I really hope that she can bring Riley and his buds down. I like how you compare this society to Nazi germany, it reallly shows how bad it has become. Great chapter, can't wait for more!
thanx so much...yeah, the girl needed to open her eyes....thanx for review
Dirktavian
03/04/2006 09:35 am
Deeply disturbing, but good thing she got her mojo back. Now, if she can just give Spike his 'stones' back, they will truly be the dynamic uber-couple they can be. Thanks for the regular updates-- this is truly an interesting story.
working on it ;) thanx so much for your excellent review :)
jeanie
03/04/2006 09:23 am
great update! can't wait for more.
thanx :)
fallen_angel
03/04/2006 08:00 am
the slayer is back!alright!spike didn't have to go through all that did he?
not saying yet ;) thanx for review
Robyn
03/04/2006 05:54 am
Thank you for the update, the way you went from the horror that is Riley and his organization to the reactions of Buffy did a fantastic job of upping a chapter that was very emotional to begin with. Really looking forward to the take-down of Riley and his organization.
thanx so much, so glad you liked it...this was kind of intense for me to write, too... :)
03/04/2006 05:11 am
oh... my.. thats horrible.. how could someone do that to a person? thats just, indescribable.. go slayer buffy, you go a kick some monster ass!!!
she will, i promise!! :) thanx for review!
03/04/2006 05:10 am
oh yeah...loving this...I'm getting all excited for the riley smackdown....it's not gonna be that easy, is it? There's gonna be more pain to deal with isn't there? :(
Brilliant as usual!
Brilliant as usual!
yes, unfortunately, you are right...but riley will definitely get whats coming to him...thanx so much! :)
gaillee
03/04/2006 04:48 am
Wow! That was strong! Thank you for an outstanding update. I can hardly wait to see how Buffy helps bring this down.
thank you so much...it was kinda tough to write, glad you liked it :)
03/04/2006 03:06 am
OH yes...take down the whole lot of them. Poor Spike, you just KNOW he did go through training (I hope Buffy finds that out for certain to help fuel her fire). Pets Julian and Spike too.
Excellent update again.
K
Excellent update again.
K
no comment yet on whether or not spike went through that... either way he's been through hell... :( thanx for great review :)
kim
03/04/2006 02:57 am
About time she had the full realization.
Well done with thinking up all the tortures. I'm guessing this was painful to write, from a caring human point of view.
Well done with thinking up all the tortures. I'm guessing this was painful to write, from a caring human point of view.
it was!! I had to take a break halfway through, it was majorly hard to get through it and i was crying by the end...thanx for the review, guess it worked, anyway :)
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