Cycle of Rebirths by weyrwolfen
Chapter: Converging Paths

nmcil
06/08/2007 07:18 pm
great selection of quotes -
Thanks!

Niamh
07/09/2006 05:30 am
She pictured herself, a pale ghost in her kimono: white fabric against white snow. Only her dark hair would stand out, drifting around her face like a living thing.

Stark imagery, evoking the reverse coloring of the modern day vampire who is relucant consort and yet still equal to the current Slayer. Wonderful word usage, as always.
Thank you! I had a lot of fun playing with parallel construction in this piece, and twisting the comparisons in different directions.

lauralll
03/07/2006 03:42 am
This story is really compelling. I am waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!
Coming right up. Thanks for the review!

devani
03/06/2006 06:18 pm
soooo good! please continue! I love the detail you go into about the past slayer.
Thank you! I'm glad you like her.

vladt
03/06/2006 04:29 am
denial buffy is alive and well. love the fic. thanks
Egypt is a beautiful vacation spot. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

03/06/2006 12:19 am
Maybe Kaede could tell Buffy about her consort to help Buffy get over herself, the Wankers' Council programming and her "friends." More story please.
Hee hee. Perhaps something along those lines might happen. Thanks for the review!