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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 2 Growing Pains
BecomingChosenGirl13
01/14/2008 04:50 pm
I haven`t got the time to read all of it now, since i have 100 things to do, but this looks great!!. I can`t wait to read all of it..
Love, Julie..
Love, Julie..
Be glad to know your views when you get time to read more.
12/22/2006 10:36 pm
It seems like Joyce is a witch, which begs the question of who or what her father is. It makes more sense why Shanny would have ill will towards her parents, since they were always fighting and not providing her with a measure of stability. You have to love Spike being enamored with her from the first moment he saw her, simply because Joyce reminds him so much of Buffy. They are going to have to take care that the little ears don't hear them since it seems Joyce is quite the snoop.
08/28/2006 09:04 pm
Interesting start. Nice to know Spike keeps bleaching his hair.
Verda
07/23/2006 11:22 pm
Sorry, couldn't finish yesterday, couldn't get back to the website the rest of the night, stupid fatal error. Thanks for the backstory on their daughter. Where did she get brown eyes from? Is she not Spike's? Too bad her life convinced her that her children where better off away from them, more likely to have a "normal" life. Really liking this story. Thanks for the read.
Thanks for reading. Lots of people have commented about the brown eyes. I’ve decided to go in and change them because, although my genetic research tells me it is possible - although unlikely - it is worrying readers and has no bearing on the story.
Glad you’re enjoying it.
Glad you’re enjoying it.
Lou
03/15/2006 02:15 pm
Intriguing - such a cool idea.
Thanks for review. Trying to update soon.
zanthinegirl
03/14/2006 05:47 pm
Interesting backstory! Really intrigued by this one.
Weaver
03/14/2006 01:00 pm
I love this and you write beautifully. Good flashbacks as well - keeps the flow of the story going. More please.
Hopefully very soon. Thank’s for your comments. Much appreciated.
03/14/2006 11:44 am
lol i love little joyce.. she's so cute... granny buffy :) and um.. Shanny, is her name cause like that cause of the shanshu..?
Robyn
03/14/2006 01:53 am
Great chapter, I loved how the back story was told, and to have little Joyce walk in at that particular moment was very realistic. And having her floating two feet off the ground was very fun. Please update soon.
Thanks for review. Will do my best to update soon. I have too many stories on the go at once!
vladt
03/13/2006 10:46 pm
this is going to be a fun read. so glad it is continuing. thanks
03/13/2006 09:01 pm
I really enjoyed this chapter. It's sad how Shanny was scared when she was little. Probably why she didn't want her kids around Spike and Buffy. Poor thing. Hopefully now they will make up for lost time.
I’ve always thought being Buffy and Spike’s child would not be that good a thing.
03/13/2006 07:57 pm
Very, very interesting. Can't wait for more.
03/13/2006 06:20 pm
So the Joyce brat is floating into other people's conversations. Interesting powers she seems to have. Is she a slayer/witch?
Should find out in next episode.
03/13/2006 04:35 pm
Well Joyce is going to put them all through some major changes. Love the back story with Shanny. Great update.
I reckon they’ll certainly know she’s there - and watch out for Billy, too!
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