Belonging by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Going to War

Dirktavian
03/26/2006 08:36 am
Ok, little missy-- Brief bone to pick with you! You know I adore this story, and your writing style and sense of prose is very strong. But you did the dreaded "cut to fireplace" when the action was getting hot & heavy! Sorry, but in the words of Marti Noxon, "we love the porny." Seriously, though, you are restoring Spike to his fabulous sarcastic self-- Thank you. Another wonderful update.
sorry bout that... ;) i had to move on with the plot though... :P thanx for the great review :)

03/26/2006 03:38 am
Poor Xander, I can only imagine the fear and helplessness he is going through. To be so happy one minute because of a baby and the next to have his wife and the baby disappear. You did a great job of expressing this. And Buffy to go from a sweet moment with Spike to hell was very well written also. And Buffy is right in her decision not to allow him, him going in akin to suicide and as someone who really loves him they need to keep him from hurting himself like that. Thanks for another great chapter.
thanx so much...:)

PyroChilde
03/25/2006 04:25 pm
Ok, KILL RILEY!! Poor Buffy and Spike and Xander. He just got his family and now they take them! GGRR!! And Spike! Buffy wants him all free abut he can't fight them soldiers! GGRRR!!! I have never hated Riley more!

Awesome chapter! UPDATE!!
yeah, they're just kinda stuck in an impossible situation :( thanx for the review :)

Nemo
03/25/2006 11:55 am
It's war!! Go Buffy!
And Spike's not coming with her, that's a relief! I think she made the right decision there.
Great update, can't wait for more!
i agree, thanx so much :)

03/25/2006 07:43 am
Still all with the loving of this fic!
thanx so much :)

Spikes Slayer2
03/25/2006 01:42 am
great chapter.. i can really understand xanders pain..
yeah, poor thing...poor anya...thanx for review ;)

Fetching Mad Scientist
03/24/2006 11:51 pm
Oh you have got to know that Spike is going after her...it's just the kind of thing he would do. Love this story!
of course ;)

Nikkole
03/24/2006 10:58 pm
Very good chapter, as always! I am glad you put that last part in there. It is true that she ordered him, but not in the way that would be bad. Did that make sense? I hope we finally see some Riley pain! Oh, and I have a question, I noticed when they were fighting Riley in his office that Spikes chip fired at the THOUGHT of him hurting Riley, does Riley have a special thing in the ship that makes it fire at the THOUGHT of hurting him, or am I reading to much into it?
remember when spike got shocked just for pointing a gun at xander? and in fool for love...the chip works on intent...as i wrote in that chapter, the chip fired the moment that he actually decided he was *going* to shoot Riley... does that help? :)

03/24/2006 08:30 pm
Oh wow...stop making me cry woman! I'm supposed to be evil!

Brilliant as ever...More please!
lol...this chapter made you cry?? thanx so much!! i'll take that as a compliment, cause i didn't expect it to!!

03/24/2006 08:18 pm
Wow - excellant chapter. thank goodnes spike is not going - the soldiers could kill him with his chip

what a fab story! *hugs*
thanx so much, so glad you are liking it :)

fallen_angel
03/24/2006 07:20 pm
i hope Riley gets a slow and painful death!what's Anya done to him? is Spike losing his chip anytime soon?
Anya's just a pawn to riley....we'll see about de-chipping...could happen ;)

03/24/2006 06:37 pm
wonderful update!

Because I love you. And I won’t let you hurt yourself like that.”

sigh
so glad you liked that...i thought it was important to draw that line...she has to let him make his own choices, but when you love someone you don't always let them do whatever they want, even when it's dangerous :) thanx for the review

Bridget
03/24/2006 05:55 pm
Good chapter. I like this strong and resolved Buffy. I hope Riley finally gets his.
i like her too :) glad you like this chappie :) and he will, i promise :)

Cas
03/24/2006 03:53 pm
I agree with Buffy completely. Either both Xander and Spike should go, or neither. I was wondering about the seeming double standard. I also wonder how Riley found the house. They thought it was so safe!
all will be revealed later...i agree, buffy is right on this one :)

Lou
03/24/2006 03:48 pm
I bet he's right on her heels!
why do i think you're right?? ;)

rayan
03/24/2006 03:19 pm
lovely...well not the anya part...just the rest...buffy is what ive always wanted her to be....just perfect....good chappie, keep it up
thanx, i love writing buffy like this, too ... glad you liked it