Forever Alive by Shadow
Chapter: Chapter 5

DoWnEr
04/18/2007 10:53 am
That's it? A child molester even though he has a soul and he still lives?

I don't know about you but if i had the chance and woudldn't go to jail for it i'd castrate or just plain all pedophiles with a smile on my face. I mean he's vampire... what's a little stab wound in the stomache going to do?

It's an intersting twist and plot for a Buffy fic but to let a pedophile off so easily...

ftfchris@hotmail.com
oh dont worry, he isnt getting off do easily....

11/27/2006 03:29 pm
Really liked the hurting peeping Angel part. Great update.
Oh ya... peeping angel is a bad angel

11/18/2006 02:17 am
ROFL Angel got what was coming to him. Lusting over Dawn.
Damned straight.

Verda
06/18/2006 12:28 am
Still chuckling over "perverted" Angel, and Spike's glee in watching him getting less then he deserves. Really like your style of writing *grins*.
Thanks sugar!

romero
04/12/2006 06:09 am
I love your story and am looking forward to learning more about Buffy.
Thank you, and more coming soon.

vladt
04/12/2006 04:33 am
this is a fun read. enjoying it immensely. buffy could hurt angel a little more, a lot more, just more, more more... ok, better now, thanks for the fun read.
she will be... and you are welcome

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/11/2006 10:23 pm
Good chapter.I like Angel,but sometimes I like Creepy!Angel.
I also seem to have a penchant for Insane!Angel post NFA.Update soon.I really want to hear the story.
Updating soon!

sirc
04/11/2006 09:05 pm
great chapter
thank you

Spikes_lizard
04/11/2006 08:17 pm
i agree with everyone you are evil with leaving a cliffy. But i so what you did to angel need more
evil is me! and more on the way!

04/11/2006 03:22 pm
this is sooo good Shadow...really unexpected storyline...love it
Thanks Jack.

04/11/2006 11:45 am
I hate you for that cliffie....no fair, I need more!!!
More is on the way.

04/11/2006 08:56 am
Teeheehee! Lots of fun with Angelus' parts. He must be even more nuts to be peeping on Dawn. BTW, nice cliffie.
*grin* he IS nuts. And Thanks!

04/11/2006 08:01 am
I love how she protects what is hers, though I kinda wish that her sword had been about three inches lower. Spike had the right idea. :D I am really looking forward to Buffy's story. Thanks for the great chapter, I hope you will be able to update soon.
You are Welcome! and updating soon *GRIN*

Kat
04/11/2006 07:50 am
ohhhh i cant wait lol well i guess i gotta but i dont really wanna lol
*giggle* th wait wont be long, I promise.

PyroChilde
04/11/2006 05:51 am
Wow, kewl fic. This is certainly something I havent seen before. Can't wait to hear all about Buffy.
Buffy's life story (or part of it) coming soon!

PyroChilde
04/11/2006 05:50 am

Irina
04/11/2006 05:10 am
I love this premise! I just read all five chapters and i'm really enjoying the story. Fantastic update! :)
Thank you!

04/11/2006 05:09 am
this should be super interesting...loved the bit where angel got punished for being a dirty perv...something that should have happened in the show... :) ... can't wait for more :)
Thanks doll, and more is on the way...SOON! (and angel gets punished more)

04/11/2006 04:59 am
Yeah! Great new chapter. I can't wait to hear the explanation.

I wish she'd been just a little meaner to Angel. I have a feeling he's not easily discouraged, the pervert.
Thanks hun, Explaination coming next chapter.

*grin* I needed Angel alive so I could torture him some more *EVIL GRIN*

04/11/2006 04:52 am
excellent update :P
Thank you.

04/11/2006 04:50 am
Good chapter
Thank you

04/11/2006 04:50 am
and you ended it like that? Are you trying to pay me back for evil cliffhangers? lol MORE SOON
*cackle* what can I say... I learned from the best. More coming soon!