On My Mind by kittiekat
Chapter: Sifting Through

01/27/2014 06:56 pm
Great dreamscape character exploration - excellent study of Buffy's very closed minded perspectives of life and her Slayer "truths."  Also, very good study of Spike's history and his current life.  

03/26/2011 11:49 pm
Excellent fighting scenes!  Buffy is hard as a rock inside and out and she doesn't even realize it.  Maybe this is the rock to be cracked?

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12/19/2007 04:48 pm
oh that was good, some how I think they need to work on the tention to find the answer.

BuffyRat
03/31/2007 08:03 am
What she would find... so much to explain the man before her now. She will learn but will she pay attention. And a lovely battle sequence indeed!

09/26/2006 05:56 am
this is such a deep, thought-provoking read...love the way this is playing out, the things they're learning from each other...great chapter ;)

05/14/2006 02:14 pm
still very intriguing... i am enjoying this story

05/03/2006 07:41 am
Love the chemistry between them. Her not wanting to know and him not wanting to tell. And holding her up against that wall... so very, very powerful. Marvelous chapter.
Ooooh, groovy. Glad you liked!!! :)

04/19/2006 11:55 am
Powerful chapter. His understanding of her nature and her unwillingness to accept that part of herself or to see and accept his full nature is powerfully exposed in their verbal and physical sparring.
Thanks so much for your lovely comments! I'm so happy you thought so. Much obliged! :)

vladt
04/19/2006 12:44 am
this is going to be a very long fic, before any common sense,or insight can penetrate buufy's thick skull. which is just great with me. love the magic, thanks for the read.
*smirk* Ya think? ;) Luverly that you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading, is what I say! And, I guess, you're very very welcome. ;)

pretty_in_fangs
04/19/2006 12:07 am
Oh, this should be a fun ride!
I just found this story and I can't wait to see more.
I hope so! So great to hook you, though! Hope it won't disappoint! Thank you! :)

04/18/2006 11:29 pm
Great chapter!  Lot of tangible tension between those two!  And the imagery you created with the desert turned graveyard was awesome! &nbsoLoving this story.  Hope you update soon!
As is and always always should be! With the tension, I mean. :) Thanks so much! Very glad you like!

Robyn
04/18/2006 11:16 pm
It's interesting how she always thinks that she will beat him, and yet their fights on average have always been a draw. Buffy is as stubborn as ever, instead of recognizing that Spike might be different than what she thinks, she just puts it to him acting out of character. I am really looking forward to her journey through their minds.
I agree. *huge grin* So happy to read your thoughts, girl. And I hope the journey'll be entertaining! :) Thank you!

sirc
04/18/2006 06:29 pm
great chapter
Thanks! :)

me
04/18/2006 06:27 pm
loving this story
loving that you're with the love! :)

04/18/2006 05:08 pm
Another fantastic update!! *sighs dreamily* I so love this fic.
*hands over heart* Thank you! *big smile!* :) Hope you'll do nothing but! ;)

04/18/2006 04:50 pm
Hmmm. Either of them figuring out anything useful?
Maybe... ;)

kim
04/18/2006 02:59 pm
Hi, Annie!

Good story. I enjoyed reading it, as I think you caught on to, LOL.

Wishing you many happy reviews.
Hehe, surely did! And thanks for all the happy ones I received from you! Much love!!!

Pin
04/18/2006 02:44 pm
Amazing chapter! Buffy's understanding of the universe is being torn apart, bit by bit. Excellent fight sequences. I liked the way you went from the physical fight to the verbal sparring and then back to the physical - a seamless conversation in different modes. Interesting that Buffy is unable to see the larger implication of Spike's glass desert of his victims. I somehow doubt that Angel would even be able to construct such a monument in memory of his victims. Great story!
Oh *claps hands at amazing comments* so so flattered, girl! Thank you! And so happy you're enjoying it! :D

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/18/2006 12:43 pm
Good chapter.Stupid Buffy and Spike.Update soon.
It's Spuffidity. ;) And thanks!

04/18/2006 12:38 pm
excellent chappie
Thanks ever so!