OH I wonder what all they are going to say

well that was intense...i wonder what's in store for them in buffy's mind...

lovely and intruiging chapter - I enjoyed it immensely

sorry I haven't reviewed again. I caught up at FF.net and am waiting for new chapters

How like Buffy, she sees the truth of Spike, she feels the truth of Spike, but she continues to try to deny the truth, to try to pretend that everything she has discovered about how he feels is ‘manufactured’. She is so comfortable in her belief that someone can’t love without a soul, so comfortable with her pain over Angelus’s inability to love, and later Angel leaving, for her own good, that she is unwilling to allow anything but the hurt part of her to have a say in how things are perceived. And yet each time she sees new proof that her beliefs are not accurate, even though she tries to ruthlessly push away the new, cracks are forming, most not quite visible, that are weakening the foundation of her self-imposed prison. That is something I really love about this story, as much as she might try to deny things, they are traveling through Spike’s mind and she knows that there is truth behind the emotions of the memories, and even the fantasies. A truth that in the real world she has been able to more easily deny, to just declare them as not real and that any actions he takes because of these emotions are for selfish purposes only.

I hope you don’t mind to much me analyzing like this. I have a tenancy to do so, in particular with a fic like yours that you can really see the change within the characters, or in this case, more accurately character. :P

that was a fun romp in spike's mind. should be even more fun in buffy's. good update, thanks for the fun read.

Lovely trip through Spike's head. I can't wait to see what he learns in Buffy's.

Justed wanted to comment on how awsome your story is! I really like how non-fluffy it is. There were so many different ways you could have taken this, like Buffy seeing all his memories and falling in love with him that way, but I LOVE how she sees were he buries the people he kills, how you dont sugar-coat him, and how confusing the memories and traveling around in them are. Its absolutly fasicenating to read! Keep up the good work!

Wonderful story as far. I shall await the next update.

Good chapter.It's okay to laugh.I would have reviewed earlier except the power went out for three hours.Update soon.

Delighted to see you posting here - I hope you bring more of your tales. Loving this one - surreal nightmares and all. A great way for Buffy to come to know Spike.

update update !!

LOL, poor Buffy having the scales forcebly pyulled off her eyes boy is the girl an idiot :P

Wonderful chapter and very successful, since I am anxiously anticipating the next one. I love the dialog and how the transitions meld with the action - very imaginative! The sequence right before they leave Spike's head really communicates how his feelings eveolved, and I really like how you have Buffy merge into each participant.

so the memory they share, is that got something to do with the whole cecily, buffy - beneath you deal? hmm *ponders*

"well, then, start declaring your undying love for him!" ;-) lolz...
Loved the update!

More please!!!!