ohhh - I wonder what willow is up to and wondering what dawn has done. Very good chapter and very intriguing story

my guess was right. i think Dawn needs a shrink or a counsellar

DAWN? Gawd, I always hated her and the scoobies... heck, hated most of the characters... but this chapter really makes me hate them...

Thanks for the update. I like that we got Xander's, Willow's, and Dawn's thought of some of the things going on it their lives. And how these thoughts let us know some of Buffy's life.

fascinating chapter. delusional xander, willful red, and vengeful dawn. i am going to enjoy the read as you sort this tale out. thanks for the read.