Ok hers are alittle confusing.

oh come on, buffy...you cant do this to him...poor spike...but i think it'd do a lot to help her if he could face up to his past...

lovely chapter

She said to him “How could I ever trust you? You’ve no conscience. There’s no remorse. No need for it.” If he felt no remorse he could look much easier, by not looking and just by creating this monument, even if he doesn’t realize it, there is some remorse. On the flip side she also said “no need for it.” On this there is truth. Spike’s killings were usually more about the hunt then the torture. Humans were his food and him killing them for that is no different then a human hunting for food. In Buffy’s acknowledgement that Spike had already started to change, but that she didn’t believe he wouldn’t change back at any moment, she is forgetting a truth, once a person has changed they can never change back. They might change again to resemble what they were before, but there are always differences and new layers. In addition she should be supporting him and encouraging him with his change. Not just as someone who has found him a helpful ally, but because of who she is, the Chosen One, the Slayer.
I loved the use of Monet as a place of peace for her; he is one of my favorite artists. I really enjoyed the imagery of this chapter.

ok, now I know why Buffy is looney, she just is no real reasons :P

one of the buffys in her mind should take control, because it is chaos. very good read, thanks

Wow, that was fantastic!! You did a great job in writing and describing Buffy's often chaotic thoughts. It's nice to see what's going on in her head. Can't wait to see what she decides before Spike's completely gone.

Good chapter.Poor insecure Spike.
Update soon.

Wow...just realized I had an account, lol. But of course...cant remember anything about it!

Also wanted to apoligize for the horrible spelling in the first review and tell you that I also learned you have a ff.net acount so I will hop on over there so I cant get email updates!

God...you must (or have, sorry dont know your age!) kick ass in Lit class. Metaphors, writing, you got it all down. Loved it so SO much! Especially that last part...could she grant him any sort of understanding? Because she has to understand him somewhat to actually know him enough to fall in love with him. She is not like Spike who can read her easily but can still fall in love with her without really knowing her.

Really...words cannot express my love for this story. Do you post at fanfiction.net? Because I would love to add you as one of my favorite stories.

More magical dreamscapes and the little advances and setbacks. Yum.