I always wondered if that was the slayer that said that or Buffy? "Don't ever touch him"?

I'm unsure as to why this story is so popular. I'm sorry but this is as far as I can read.

It's not that your writing is terrible, but the story as a whole has been unbelievably repetitive - and bluntly put boring. The majority of the story so far consists of Buffy demanding control and Spike incoherently babbling that he was hers, and only hers. I don't believe you needed to repeat the scene so many times to reiterate your point. In my opinion, this story would be a lot better if you trimmed off the dominance-submission scenes and went on with developing the story.

It's been chapter 22 and the story hasn't moved at all.

Wow - go Buffy! :-) To bad we didn't really hurt him that bad,,, heehe

Love it! Can these bone heads figure it out? Where's Anya - we need some major blurting out right about now.

Hehehe  Whoops!  Loved this chapter.  Sorry I've been review slacker, this week.  Can't wait to read more. :)

I'm reading your story at the Crypt, but I had to find a way to give you a little love back.

I absolutely love this fiction. It's my favorite in a long time.

I see it as a magnification of the s/p relationship in season 6. Spike is obseessed with Buffy and is her "slave." Buffy wants Spike but can't help hurting him. She is also possesive and secretice at the same time.

So it is the same dynamic as the show, but you've given it new life by intensifying it. Now the dynamic is more of a physical forse that neither can escape.

And it's hot! I love a dominent Buffy.

great chapter

Oh my. But will they wait for an explanation? Or will they presume that he's somehow got *her* under control?

the defense of spike would be so much better, if the personality defending wasn't so severely abusing him. still this is a very good read, thank you.

Oh I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next.

I have to tell you I've been enjoying this very much.

Espically this chapter.

Well, I've been rushed
later

As if Buffy's treatment of him wasn't bad enough, now Xander wants to beat him down? And of course, he had a chip before, you morons. Vampires don't show up looking half starved if they've been able to feed!! Where's the scientific logic Giles and Willow are supposed to possess, hmm?

I don't think tripping would necessarily set off the chip, anyway, since in itself, it is not an attempt to harm. It is a prank for humiliation. Biting, hitting, pinching - those are attempts to cause pain. Tripping someone isn't, 99% of the time.

I hope Anya will intercede with that famous no-bull way with words she has. The whole Scooby group needs to be shamed into next week.

This story pretty much just makes me angry, for Spike mostly. I( don't know if I can continue reading his debasement.

oh dear. poor spike. awwww great chapter. :)

oops! Xander strikes again.

I am really starting to hate Buffy in this. No, not because of her abuse of Spike...I can see that it is likely the primal in her and out of her control. What is pi$$ing me off royally is how she does NOT see how her WORDS are ripping him apart! She has NO regard for his emotions at all. She is only barely feeling guilty for the physical abuse and that isn''t the worst of it by far. It's all about HER as usual. I hate her for that in this story. Spike was better off in the hands of the initiative, at least THEY were open about the torture they had planned.

Excellent update....hope SOMEONE calls Buffy on her emotional abuse but it's more likely Spike will be blamed somehow.......sigh.

I love this story even if it is making me want to bitch slap Buffy for the next month.

Kathleen

Bloody brilliant!!

Bloody brilliant!!

Buffy, Buffy, Buffy, how are you going to get out of this little predicament?

More soon please.

Good grief! I always thought Buffy should have protected Spike in many ways from Xander but that display may tell Giles something she doesn't want him to know. More story please.

Great chapter. Can't wait to read what will happen next. Although as stupid as the scoobies are I am sure that Buffy will be able to explain her reaction and they won't have a clue.

Ooh!!!!!!!!

A little redirected anger makes Amy a happy girl! :o)

GOOD! She needs to stop be so self centered and thinking that you can just hide things away that you don't like. That is not how the world works.

yup, secret's gonna come out. Oh and Bufyy's a ...um you know..um ..

Two words: Oh snap. :O

Can't wait to read more!

Now maybe someone can help them!!