that last bit brought me to tears...hope all turns out okay...great chapter :)

i love this chapter - ahhh the first hints of a possible dawn/wes? I know she needs to grow up first but i adore that pairing! i love this story and the other couple's i cant wait to see what happens next

I have enjoyed this story and because I couldn't spend a lot of time on the computer reading I printed it out and read that way. You are a remarkable author and I am sorry for whatever you have gone through getting this out. I will read through to the last updated chapter and reveiw some more. Fantastic story!!!!!
linnea2sweet@yahoo.com is my email address. Would love to hear from you!

Have I told you how much I love that Dawn was made from both of them, because I do. From the beginning, when it was revealed that Dawn was made from Buffy, it was obvious that she wasn't a clone and since she was human there needed to be both X&Y chromosones, glad it was Spike's in your story. Very surprised that you had Wesley show up at the hospital. Nice for Dawn to hear from another source that none of it was her fault. Yay for you!

great chapter

First of all, hope you're feeling better. Secondly, I gotta tell you that you've tied up most of my free time for the past 4 days. Yep, I started reading Origins: Book One, got hooked(grabbed me and wouldn't let go), then I moved on to Origins:Revelations and was completely gobsmacked. You are one heck of a writer! Wish Joss Whedon had had some fanfic writers around while both Buffy and Angel were still on the air. Maybe then some of the characters (even those I wasn't crazy about) would have been treated with more kindness and consistency. Have heard a rumor that there's a Spike tv series in the works. Don't have a clue as to how true it is, but if it does come into being, hope the writers have half of your talent. Can't wait for the next installment of this fic. You've got me on pins and needles here, so please, don't torture me for too long!:)

Good chapter.  Ol' Wesley is walking a fine line, morally.  He'd best be careful.  Can't wait till the next update.

actually enjoy any delay in updates. gives me an excuse to reread the entire wonderful, again and again. thanks for the fantastic read.

Very glad to see the updates on this fic, excellent story, pls keep it coming.

Thanks so much for this, I don't care how long I have to wait for the next one as long as comes. I just have to know how this all works out.

Thanks for the updates, Nia. I had two chapters to catch up on,so obviously missed one somewhere. I hope you are able wrestle the block into submission and continue soon with this wonderful story. *hugs Nia* (carefully, so as not to hurt your shoulder)

Great update.

Damn this is like 24 :)

Still with you although there are a lot of players to keep in mind in this story.

Excellent story. Please write more on this.

I've been gone from online for a bit, so I was so happy to come back and see this update. This is the very first thing I've read! Wonderful update. I love how so much has happened in the 2-3 days - over several chapters. Such complexity, such detail. I love this fic.

Oooh, another splendid chapter!! How you and others write Dru so well, I'll never know, but goodness that was great!! Loved the whole thing, especially the Wes/Dawn scene. I never pictured the pair until this story. Can't wait for more!!

you don't have to remind me of the timeframe. I am so into this story that I was so excited to see the chapter. Well finally Wes makes some tyep of move. Even though he know better than to say anything or make a move. Great to see the small family together when they were letting Dawn go home. I hope Spike gets some real help with Angelus.

thanks for the update..maybe spike can understand dru's babbling in time to help them!?!

I am so pleased to see an update of this story it is my absolute favorite. Will wait for your muse always. I am just happy when a update comes around. your fan

Thanks for the recap. Another excellent and intriguing chapter. Write when you can - I'll always be there to read it.

I have really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really hope that your health improves soon, and everything is looking up. I am sure I speak on behalf of all of your readers when I say we greatly appreciate all the work you have done to put all of this to words.

Excellent chapter update. You cover a lot of detail in your chapters to move us all along in various places. Thanks for the timeline reminder too.

great update as always. wes and dawn-interesting. also interesting is faith and jenner, did not see that coming. can't wait for more, it is such a joy to see an "origins" update.

Excellent work!! Thank You for letting us enjoy your hard work.
I'm really lousy at writing reviews (as you can probably tell)
Again Thank you, and please continue. ;)

Technically speaking , Dawn's age is hard to pin down. There's her age from the date her human body was created, the age she appears to be , and the age of the key. So Wes dating her wouldn't be too wierd to her family but he'd have to watch out for the cops.

Great chapter. Too bad you can't hire a secretary by paying them with chapters before everyone else.

Excellent chappie

Excellent update!