Unfinished Business by TalesofSpike
Chapter: Chapter 1

09/06/2006 03:36 pm
What an adorable first chapter! I can't wait to see where you are going with this story it is very excellant!
Lol! Well I think you're just about to reach one of the really fun bits...

Hope you enjoy it, sweetie, and thank you!

06/02/2006 02:32 am
hell of a hook, good read thanks. based on what i have read of yours, i am sure the rest will be a fantastic read.
Thank you! Hopefully, the story will live up to expectations. I should be posting the second chapter soon (as in within the next couple of hours).

05/31/2006 08:37 pm
Spike taking care of business looking forward to this trip.
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. With luck you shouldn't have too long to wait.

05/31/2006 12:19 am
Very interesting start I am looking forward to this fic and where you take it.
The b'day girl wanted a party, hosted by Ilona with The Immortal/Buffy, Angel/Nina and Spike/Illyria with all the fireworks and bitchiness that that might entail. Who am I to deny her?

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

05/31/2006 12:15 am
Ooooo, interesting....and Buffy under some kind of influence? Must be Tuesday.

And Giles, you're an idiot.
Well, my mission/the birthday girl's request was to get Spike/Illyria and Angel/Nina to a party hosted by Ilona and attended by Buffy/Immortal.

Giles seemed to be reasonable incentive to get the AI crowd to go, but I had to get him there to be the bait... And you just know that Buffy putting a human in hospital would set off all sorts of warning bells in his head.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

05/30/2006 04:36 pm
hmmmm intresting start
Thank you. Hopefully, it'll have an interesting middle and end as well.

05/30/2006 03:18 pm
Interesting start....I think I'm gonna enjoy this very much.
Thank you!

I think I'm gonna enjoy this very much.
I hope you do.

05/30/2006 02:51 pm
oh wow...this could get very interesting very fast..can't wait til you update
Thank you! With luck you won't have to wait too long. The next chapter is partially written and I'm hoping to finish it off when I can throw off the ehadache I've had for a few days now.

05/30/2006 02:10 pm
Very intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes. Thanks for the new story.
Thank you for taking the time to comment. This is one of two new stories I've been working on (the other being Broken Things). I'm going to try to do alternate chapters, but this one is due for the next update and the chapter is already partly written. So, hopefully, (once I can get rid of the headache that's been around since Friday) you shouldn't have too long to wait.