This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Chapter 1: Immune

04/25/2007 03:07 am
oh Holy Mary....this is weird but interesting....mmmmmm, now I am more curious.
Weird yes...I blame this on listening to Black Sabbath. :D

vladt
06/17/2006 07:52 am
love the crptic trey. can't wait to see what "So many lies spinning in head. It is important to clear spider webs before becoming to big," means. very entertaining read, thank you

06/16/2006 07:48 pm
About to get very interesting indeed, I'm sure. This is an incredible work- can't wait to see where you'll take the 'William' character :]] Nice one.

06/14/2006 01:30 am
wow...this is intense, and fascinating so far...reminds me very much of holocaust stories i've read...trey reminds me of a male dru sort of...excellent chatper :)
Thanks! I have plans for Trey. Just haven't got any of them ironed out yet. ;)

nmcil
06/13/2006 07:57 pm
Love your intro - powerful lyrics and a really good intro for your piece - I look forward to reading the work. Please Please Please don't let this work join the ranks of the "abandoned" FF - Really like your sparse structure - your language gives the impact and very good descriptive quality that draws me into wanting to know more about them straight-away.

Good Luck with your work -
Thank you!!!! I promise not to abandon this story. That is one of my pet peves. I hate finding a really good story only to have it abandoned.