Every Little Bit Hurts by Schehrezade
Chapter: Chapter One

03/22/2006 09:17 pm
oh wow!!! this story is amazing!!! very intriguing premise...poor dawnie...you brought me to tears...at least she gets to be with her mom again...and how will the scoobies react to buffy and spike?

02/16/2006 09:06 pm
How sad - this is a really good start to your story. I really enjoyed it. I feel sorry for Buffy to lose them both at once - what a horrible thing to experience and what a scary demon.

12/16/2005 11:28 am
Schez--all I can say is...wow. I somehow missed this when you first started posting, and just caught it today, and I must say, I'm horrified and upset and grieving and fascinated and intrigued...Gemma seems very real, Tara completely different from anything ever seen on the show (and yes, I agree with Megan, kinda unlikeable, but that's understandable and okay) and Xander and Anya and their noticeable changes as well...Wow. CoW boys helping, with orders to assist instead of destroy the Slayer...wow. And so, pleading, on bended knee, please update soon? This is so original, and something completely different...but also fantastic in it's own right...so, yeah, more, as soon as you can possibly deliver....

09/23/2005 01:31 pm
Burnz 07/16/2005 @ 05:13 pm Wow what an awesome beginning! I am anxious to see what direction this takes and if Glory will be involved.

09/23/2005 01:31 pm
chanel 5 07/05/2005 @ 04:11 am Email I like the story, dawn's death and buffy's reaction, but I'm not sure if I like the bad guy. I'll keep reading to see what happens next.

09/23/2005 01:30 pm
~*~Tasha~*~ 06/27/2005 @ 04:26 pm Email URL Uh oh ... that is sooooo not good. Spike and Buffy are going to have their hands full trying to kill this new vampire. What if Glory gets her hands on the vampire or can get him on her side? Egads ... this is definitely not good. Excellent start to the story. Curious to see where you head next with it.

09/23/2005 01:30 pm
ComedyofErrors 06/26/2005 @ 08:19 pm Heart wrenching. But good. Very, very good.

09/23/2005 01:29 pm
BloodyTearsOfLife 06/26/2005 @ 08:06 pm Email Wow, that was a really interesting twist. Never saw that coming at all. But I thought the key had to be something pure, that a vamp couldn't be the key? But it's fanfiction. Anywho, really like this first chapter and hope to see more soon!