What a fantastic and scary development, I hope that Spike will be able to help or that Buffy will somehow be able to fight back this entity.

wonderful read, even if it destroys my thoughts of what was going on. great read, thanks

Nice interweaving of S5 with an S4 setting. I'm once again sitting on the edge of my seat. Bravo!

Oh dear. This does not look good.

ooh! Interesting development :D Looks like The Entity is something similar to Glory, but at the same time it doesn't have enough of the same feeling to actually *be* Glory or some other god.
Great chapter

Every cloud has a silver lining!

qEvery cloud has a silver lining!

Ok, that was just...creepy! I wonder why the entity in Buffy knows about Dawn while Buffy does not. Maybe the thing is crazy enough that it can see that Dawn isn't real. Great update, you have me waiting on edge for more!

Ooh, creepy!

for once, i agree with evil buffy... kill the annoying brat... lol

This is just downright scary! I've got a really bad feeling. Hope Spike can help Buffy regain control or that Joyce can do something to bring her back to herself. And you're a wicked, evil author to leave with your faithful readers with a cliffhanger like this!!! Please hurry and update soon. I don't think my ppor heart can stand the stress of waiting to see what's gonna happen next.:)

Wow! that was so powerful. Buffy and Spike each trying to fight the battles they both have inside. Your writing was so vivid. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Holy shit. ahh.


good chappie. but damn scary.

Wow, JL. Very exciting. Maybe sex would help her get a grip. It's been at least two chapters.

very intriguing - i wonder where you are going with this - look forward to figuring it out!