This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Chapter 8: Serenity

nmcil
06/19/2006 01:22 am
Wonderful new chapters and intro of new characters - much thanks for the quick updates -

06/18/2006 01:33 pm
Terrific. I need more!

Spikes Slayer2
06/18/2006 05:09 am
great 2 chapters.. i love how you are retelling all of the past events.. very nice.. :)

06/17/2006 07:53 pm
More!!!!

vladt
06/17/2006 07:25 pm
very good read. thanks love the ending of the chapter.

Lou
06/17/2006 06:52 pm
Great adventure - and nicely done with all the back stories.

SpaceLord
06/17/2006 03:22 pm
Well this story sure has a nice start....I'm with Kelly about killing them all....that is the way to go

06/17/2006 03:07 pm
wow...powerful chapter...you're developing each and every character so well...perfectly done and as always i cant wait for more :)

06/17/2006 02:52 pm
Excellent chapter! I like the way you are handling all of these parallel lines of activities. Great job.
To Everyone:
I'm SO glad that you guys liked that last chapter. I felt like I'd have better luck banging my head against my desk than actually getting the chapter finished. I am working on chapter nine. so hopefully this one will come out easier than the last. Thank you for the reviews!! =)