Very interesting take on OMWF. I liked seeing Buffy's grumblings and excuses and how her thought process was working. Still surprised at how Spike acted after their first time together, but I'm expecting he has some kind of aloof plan coming up. I wonder just what affects that bite may have that Buffy doesn't know to defend against, or if she'll make up excuses about how he's thralling her through the bite and sleep with him again. Nice story and good job.

awww...will there be more of this?? love it, love dawnie's little song...lol..and buffy's reaction...i want more!! :)

Great story morrigan! Hope your muse comes back soon. ;-)

my bad - i didn't look at your authors notes closely enough. it is showing as completed - darnit! but i'm glad to see that the ending wasn't really the ending! Guess i gotta add another WIP to my watch list!

i liked this story - it was hot and i love masterful, in control spike. but the ending of the story left me wanting. kind of just petered out there. any plans for more of this one? Please? and if not, oh well - thanks for writing it. i liked it a lot, except for that pesky ending!

I'm so glad you are continuing this story. Loved this chapter and I'm glad to hear this isn't the end. It is still classified as "complete." Loved the whole musical interlude.

great chapter

glad this is back. thanks for the fun read.

Yay!!! Finally an addition. Nice song lyrics. They really fit with the scene in this chapter. And of course, Buffy is stuck firmly in the land of denial. Can't wait for more. Please don't take as long to update again. :)

I wouldn't mind some spike cooties *wink wink*

It's lovely to see this continuation. :D As much as Buffy likes to think she is no longer in denial, she's still a bit there. Loved that Dawn knew exactly what she was going to say and I also liked the musical accompaniment. I'm really looking forward to this fic. :nod:

*applauds* Completely fantastic! I love it but that can't be the end. More. More, we need more of this deliciousness.