Chapters have been good sense my last review(dunno wat chapter) but the possessive/jealous demon Buffy gets confusing. In the beginning she actually liked Spike (i think) a little bit and didn't even want nobody touching him. Also after demon Buffy gets through with Spike it seems like he stops listening to Buffy(or is it just me?) and well thats wierd but the story is great!

What a frightening ending particularly knowing that the demon possessing Buffy’s body has every intention of killing Dawn. I hope Willow will have to answer for the problems she has caused.

Totally unfair, JL.

poor dawn - she has no idea what they have planned for her to they - love the explanation - hope everything works out

more please.did i miss 64 and 65?

More theories that make since. You are brilliant!

Ahh!  Hurry up!  Dawn to the rescue...  Er..  Spike to the rescue...  Oh, where's Joyce with a shovel when you need her?

Eeeep!!

Go save them Dawn! Then finally find some way to get rid of the bitchy thing!!

ok can't wait to see how you get them out of this! every time i get my hopes up , they're dashed. love the story

Okay, this is just... cruel. Every time we think our heroes might be just about home free, you hit 'em with another whammy. You do know how to write a roller coaster of a plot! Love the way you're revealing the secret of Dawn's being the key. Hope you update soon. I don't deal well with suspense. It takes a real toll on my fingernails. lol

ps why is chapter coming up as 66 i counted them thinking i'd miss two i only counted 64

it doesn;t seem to looking that great for spike at the moment but i know your going to fix it so i'm not worry about spike i just hope dawn doesn't get hurt first as alway great update jl gave yourself another A+ plus i think a gold star this time LOL sorry that just my inner teacher coming out well done though

Crap. was it Buffy or the Demon that gave the command not to listen to any other command. This is SO not of the good!

That's why Dawn can calm her, makes sense. Very scared for Spike right now, she can do so much damage and not kill him. Very angsty chapter. She's so evil. Great job!

well, she's back. come on spike do something. great update, thank you.

I hope I didn't miss anything by not thoroughly reading the three chapters that seem to be the same, just re-posted. Anyway, that was a cliffie ending. When is Spike going to give Buffy a good hiding? More story please.

Good chapter, but more and more something is bothering me.

Spike has not done a single thing to show how strong he is, how powerful he is...other then stand in the way and let Buffy beat the shit out of him.

I guss my problem is, he is a master vamp, trained by 3 of the most deadly vamps that ever lived. Yet every turn, you've made him helpless. When he should be taunting the demon into becoming rash and stupid, he sits there and takes it.

Yes, I get that the bond is powerful. And I get that Spike loves Buffy. But he isn't, pardon the expression, Xander.

I have a horrible feeling that in the end, Buffy and Dawn will beat back the demon, and Spike will be reduced to, as he has said in the story itself, a ponce, a wanker, a sniveling mama's boy.

It's a great story, well written and with twists and turns. I enjoy reading it. But there is no much of Spike being a victim, too much of him being passive. Give the vamp his manhood back soon and maybe, jsut maybe, you can bring his charecter back the way it should be. Otherwise, I think, while being a great story, it will end up lacking.

I left the review on the first of the triple chapter.

First off, excellent chapter. She had a bit of a James Bond moment didn't she? You can tell she's an ancient primordial demon, or she'd know that you never soliloquey about your evil plans b/c then you get beat. ;) Can't wait for the next update.

Triple dose of more nasty - I hope Dawn is smart today.