Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire by wolf116
Chapter: The Whelp in all His Glory

Robyn
08/01/2006 07:45 am
Spike's jealousy over Alex was really quite funny. I love how his and Buffy's reactions to things are stilled based on their 'delusional' world. I have really enjoyed catching up on this story and am looking forward to the next update.
Robyn, I love you. You review every chapter. And always leave nice ones too.

Spike's jealousy stems from Sunnydale, he's just reflecting it onto this version of the whelp.

07/26/2006 02:03 am
i wonder where dawn, andrew and faith are? wouldnt it be funny if they were like a family or something..
Uh, well! They will turn up, just not the way that everyone's thinking.

Nikkole
07/25/2006 01:44 pm
I am still not sure about what is going on here. I am still leaning towards a holding cell. IT imakes the most sence to me. UNLESS, you are a 4400 fan and they are in Buffy's mind to create a stronger bond....that would be cool! Hope you update again soon!
Oh just wait, a few more chapters and you'll have the answer to what is going on.

Irina
07/25/2006 07:49 am
Whoa! Xander... I mean Alex was incredibly rude, figures it would be hate at first sight between Spike and Alex. I liked how affectionate Buffy was with Spike in front of Alex. Loved the chapter!
Rude, gross, and funny. Hate at first sight, I just love that summation.

07/25/2006 03:04 am
I love the way your wrote Xander. I could vividly picture him with food hanging out of his mouth.
Lmao, it was gross yet funny.

07/25/2006 12:24 am
your description of xander was so totally gross..very well done...another great chapter and cant wait for more :)
Yep that was totally gross.. It made me sick trying to write it.

Verda
07/24/2006 11:57 pm
This is torture you know! At this rate it's gonna take five or six chapters more to meet everyone, if not more. Good to see that you're writing Xander the same clueless dork, with bad table manners. And talk about clueless, so in the dark here have no idea where this is going, hopefully to some Spuffyness soon. Great job!
Five or Six? Poor old Xander, don't you just feel for him though?

No idea, I don't think anyone has any idea of where this is going, except for the girl who's writing it.

07/24/2006 09:50 pm
ewwww xander....
Yep, but was that not the way Xander would be?