Destiny of One by Yzba
Chapter: Two

Lou
01/05/2007 03:55 pm
Spooky!
lol

12/31/2006 09:42 am
Thank you for having the scoobies acknowledge his love for her, even if it was to late. Having him carry her back home and tend to her was one of the most heartbreaking thing's I've read. You showed his love for her beautifully and now for their future. Wonderful chapter, Yzba, thanks.
it may not be too late for the Scoobies to acknowledge it. But will they remember that they do realize he's grieving?

12/22/2006 05:25 pm
I'm glad Dawn was able to convince him to come out of the sun before it fully rose. Interesting that everyone could see Spike's feelings for Buffy enough to know they shouldn't take her body from him. It's telling that he was willing to take her pain into himself, when he was already suffering, if it would bring her some sense of peace

11/19/2006 12:53 am
Good work.

Lou
08/21/2006 10:27 pm
That was really well done, so moving.
Thank you so ush fot the read and for the review!

Robyn
08/15/2006 02:01 am
Spike’s pain and anguish was so clear that it made my eyes tear up and my heart hurt for him. I loved the comfort of the last line. Thanks for the update, it was beautifully written.
Reviews like yours are the reason I love writing, thanks

08/03/2006 10:17 pm
Keep up the grate wore. I LUV IT. P.S. Update as soon as ya can YzBa!!!!! :love:
Thanks you so much, once again, I can't say enough how good it feels to know you liked it

vladt
08/03/2006 02:56 am
i thought it would be tough to follow up the excellent first chapter. wow,was i wrong. great read, thank you
It's so good to know that people actually enjoy reading this, you can't know how happy you just made me

Esther
08/02/2006 11:26 pm
Oh wow, this is gorgeous!! I've got tears flowing right now from remembering that last scene in 'The Gift.' Egads, I can't wait for more!
Too know that I was able to move you with this chapter means a lot. Thank you so much!!

Bridget
08/02/2006 09:21 pm
Great story. Very nice interpretation of what happened after she jumped. I can't wait to read more.
So many thanks for you!!! I always felt that there was something missing in that plotline..

08/02/2006 09:34 am
A very powerful and emotional chapter. The love and tenderness that he showed for her was wonderful. Sorry that you had trouble with this, I could never do it but it looks like you have talent and you clearly have a story to tell, so let your muse and friends guide you. Wonderful chapter full of possibilities. Thanks for the read.
Thanls for the read and the review. It means a lot that you love the chapter and the story!

kim
08/02/2006 09:09 am
Whoa...intense.
I know, Thanks;)