Thank god! I thought she was never going to get bored with the torture!

Ooh, this is torturous!  Always leaving off just before anything big actually occurs!  Arg!  Ah well, thus is the way of a good cliffie.  Will be watching for the next update.  :)

Bitey is not evil. Bitey is good.

Whew! What a powerful, emotionally wrenching chapter. Fantastic. Man, has Spike got a dilemna on his hands. He's really walking a fine line here. Caught between not only the need to do physical damage to the demon in order to weaken her, but also his own demon's desire for revenge and all the while not wanting to hurt Buffy's body. And now he's also got to deal with the pressure of finding a way to keep Dawn safe. You are a wicked author, and I can't wait to see how you pull this off! :)

Great job of getting Spike and Buffy able to defeat/subdue the deamon. Go Spike!

Evil jl! Making us think that it was holy water! So relieved that it wasn't, I can handle only so much angst. Looking forward to their revenge against her. Better chapter, less angst. Thanks.

I hope this works. Good chapters

Yes. It is time for Spike to take command. It's time to bad Buffy entity to say bye,bye.

You really are evil with the cliff hangers. I was so worried about Spike drinking from the bottle because the Slayer is cruel enough to force him to drink holy water, and yet what happened makes perfect sense, it would take him far to long to heal from such an injury and she wants Dawn dead now. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.

NICE! I love you, but your cliffies are killing me here! I hope that him biting over the other mark works. I think it will, but hopefully it will be enought to allow Dawn to get to and weaken her. Really good chapter, and getting better and better! Keep it up!

This seems a bit more hopeful and I can handle it more and it is still a great story. I look forward to the next installment and will look in the next couple of days.

:) :)

Great job! Although last chapter i did not feel this way, I find that this update it would be a near impossibility to mistake Buffy's objective as anything else other than win this battle with as little damage to *anyone* as possible. It was great to read another one of your chapters, and I'll be biting my nails until next time:)

great update, thank you. as i've mention before you are evil. what a wonderfully evil place to stop.

Finally getting to the draining.

I've always thought that if a vampire wanted to, they could drain you in seconds, at least enough to where you'd be ineffectual.

i can't read it if he drinks the holy water i'm going to cry

I so hope this is going to work.Awesome sequels,I really love this story!

Wow that was great.

Ooh! oh! oh! ::bounces in place:: I can't wait to see them get back at that rabid rancid bitch.

GAH! Tap water? You are really, really evil. You do know that, right?
And stopping like this? Now I KNOW you're trying to drive us all crazy.
Seriously, this is a great story. Thank you.

A tasty plan indeed! Excellent.

You finally had Buffy realize and admit the major issue of this entire story....yeah you!
he would not be going through this, any of this, right now, if not for her terrible agreement, in the beginning, to Giles’ plan to bring Spike “under her control” – to take a creature already helpless and further violate his dignity and free will.

And the whole thing had been so utterly, completely unnecessary and destructive.

*…I’m so sorry…*

Giles and his needless plan just because he was tired of chaining Spike in the bathtub! Willow and her "improvements". Buffy and her insistance on seeing Spike as the evil vampire all for no real purpose and all leading to great pain and suffering especially for Spike. She needed to see and admit this. So glad you had her do so!!

Keep it coming. Looking forward to all getting their just reward.

Kathleen

please don't take this the wrong way but i read your stories like i watch horror movies...with my hand over my eyes, peeking thru my fingers to avoid the icky parts...your stories captivate me yet wig me out...i need to know what's going on and how it ends but the journey is somewhat disturbing...kind like life though, i guess...keep writing you go a unique voice and i'll keep reading with my hands over my eyes

OHHHHHHHHH but but you cant stop there - that is evil and cruel and just plain mean! You wicked woman, now I am going to have bitey fantasies all afternoon! I loved this chapter and how you are wrapping it up, I was terrified for Spike with the water and am so glad it is plain tap water now. Thank goodness, I can't wait to see what will happen next and how you are going to wrap this up. Thanks for the good read!

P.S but that was still an evil evil cliffhanger *Giggles*

Better chapter. Much better. I wonder if that part ofBuffy Angst was just for little ol' me?

Rip her throat out!! I'm sure there's some magical way to give Buffy a new body... yeah...