Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: More dangerous to lose

06/13/2007 09:22 pm
Uh oh ... Man Willow is just ... grrrr ... I really hate it when she is such a bitch. She is so arrogant. Yeah about the surprise there at the end.

11/26/2006 01:11 am
oh yea, joyce!! :) willow's making me nervous, though...hope the kids stay safe...on to more :)

sirc
08/31/2006 06:16 pm
great chapter :D

08/28/2006 02:46 pm
Another great chapter! Interesting background on Jenner and the relationships in the order. Like the way you write your crazy witch Willow. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thaks again for giving us this story.

08/28/2006 04:01 am
Boy, this is one powerful chapter. Talk about action-packed. I absolutely love it. And Joyce suddenly appearing - that was completely unexpected and just inspired. What a humdinger of a cliffie. Can't wait for the next update. :)

Kimberly Adams
08/27/2006 11:18 am
Great chapter and update! I love this story and you are a fantastic author. I had to print most of the story a while ago but have read them thru several times so I plan on reviewing all your new updates, I promise that. Just please, respond once and let me know you got this. My email is linnea2sweet@yahoo.com
thanks!

Kristen
08/27/2006 07:43 am
Gah...I LOVE when you update but I really hate cliffhangers!

This was a great chapter and I cant wait for more.

I hope you can update soon!

vladt
08/27/2006 06:54 am
wonderful read. wonderful tale. thank you.

clancy_s
08/26/2006 03:02 am
Wow, what a great chapter. Interesting plot twists and character interactions, Joyce's arrival at the end was a real surprise, and very welcome. I get the feeling we're heading towards a climax on several fronts, I eagerly await developments.

JO
08/26/2006 01:11 am
I love this story, can't wait for more. Hope things go better for you. Thank you for sharing it.

08/25/2006 05:14 pm
Go Joyce!!!!!!! I am just glad that she is there to help back up Tara and Anya. And Xander is really getting on my ever loving last nerve. I never understood how he could have so many blinders on and still be friends with them.

Jenner is going to kill her or Spike one if they get their hands on her. That was not a really smart move.

And Angel is far game. Go Buffy for making that clear.

Willow has really overstepped her bounds. She has no idea what she is doing. Or maybe she does. It is all about ME ME ME... Never taking anyone else into consideration.

Love the Dawn and Connor sleep scene.

08/25/2006 10:13 am
You have my deepest sympathy for your loses and so sorry for what life's been dealing you of late but I'm happy to know that you're coping with everything and things have settled down. Just another amazing chapter, it was so worth the wait. I'm still hoping that Glynnis cares enough about Jenner and Hawkins that she'll fight from within. So thankful that Buffy's resolved herself to Angelus' dusting. Can't wait to see how much damage Lawson's little bomb did and Willow's so out of control and she dosen't have clue. If Xander's in the way during this battle, I hope that Spike saves his ass and Xander know's it. As always fantasic job. Just love this series, great to know that there will be more. Great read. *hugs* Thanks.

Tina
08/25/2006 07:29 am
Yippee! Updates make me happy. Hmm, what will Joyce do?

08/25/2006 06:48 am
...both girls turned around to see the shimmering image of Joyce Summers standing behind them

Now that was unexpected! And very welcome, indeed! You've been holding out on me, Missy!

So delighted with this chapter! All the craziness coing on. Feels like we're down to the wire and I can't help but live on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!

08/25/2006 06:16 am
Great chapter, can't wait 'til Joyce kicks Willows skanky butt

Esther
08/25/2006 05:45 am
OMG!!!!!! JOYCE!!!! Truly, a wonderful chapter!! WOW!! Can't wait for the next one!! I'd write more, but my mind is still all hyper cause of JOYCE!!!!

Emilee
08/25/2006 04:52 am
Wow. Definitely a lot happening in this chapter. I can't wait til the next update. How many cliffhangers is this? 2...3...4? Excellent work as always.

kim
08/25/2006 03:32 am
Joyce? Whoa....

08/25/2006 02:57 am

08/25/2006 02:56 am
I'm glad things are settling down for you, sweetie. Exciting chapter - lots of stuff going down now, huh? And where the hell did Joyce come from? lol Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Tamara
08/25/2006 02:01 am
Love the comparison between Jenner and Angel.I especially love how he tried to blame everything on Dru and Spike. Not taking responsibility is in his character.

And Joyce shows up to kick Willow's ass. Bring it on!Yer gonna lose, Willow!

pretty_in_fangs
08/25/2006 01:59 am
Woah.

08/25/2006 01:06 am
Okay, that? Was evil. And fantastic. I bow before your fantastic evilness. ;-)

MARGARET
08/25/2006 12:46 am
GREAT UPDATE, THANKS SO MUCH. WOW, JOYCE IS HERE!

08/24/2006 11:55 pm
OMG OMG you rock you rock bows at your feet then kisses em .... I love you great chapter - beutifully written - love joyce and the evil willow ! You are so fab!

08/24/2006 11:30 pm
Great chapter. Love it. Things are happening really fast now.