Through Time to Me by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 1 A Mere Child

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06/01/2010 02:10 am
 

10/19/2006 05:59 pm
oh excellant chapter and start of a fic. Poor Maria - called at eleven. I am happy Buffy decided to stay and help out!

vladt
10/11/2006 04:23 am
very good hook. a look at maria and buffy concerns take second place. very interesting beginning, thank you.

Robyn
10/09/2006 03:40 am
What an interesting concept. I love how Buffy asked for more time from Spike to figure things out and then they are transported back in time with time standing still for them in there normal time.

Cas
10/08/2006 03:49 am
Interesting twist on the time travel idea. Love the story, glad I chose it.

10/05/2006 04:35 am
Interesting start. Looking forward to the rest of it. Is there some automatic translator thingie working here re language? Just finished reading Timeline(Michael Crichton) set in the 14th century and they spoke Occitan, a mixture of French and English. Did the language change that drastically in the 200 years? The more I think about it, it must have sounded drastically different especially for Buffy.
I opted out of dealing with the language problem by having a “click” sound in Buffy‘s head when they started talking! As the story is a romp rather than too serious, I thought the readers didn’ t really want a long discussion about language differences and there was no way i could write it anyway! So glad you are enjoying the story,

Lou
10/04/2006 04:23 pm
Very interesting start -- methinks Buffy doth protest too much!

Irina
10/04/2006 02:21 pm
Great start! Can't wait to read more.

10/04/2006 10:18 am
1594! What and awful time do be stuck in. The filth and disease, the living conditions and the food! YUCK! But I do like the concept and I'm looking forward to seeing what you've got in mind. Thanks for the read.
But just think who they are going to meet! i’d go back quite willingly. Sorry for pun!

jeanie
10/04/2006 08:10 am
great start! please update soon.
Hopefully Chp 3 posting tomorrow, Friday. Glad you’re enjoying the story.

10/04/2006 07:36 am
Lol, it took me a moment to realize why Spike sputtered at the end, lmao! *giggles at the idea of vampire crabs*

10/04/2006 06:16 am
Cool. Very original idea for a fic. Would love to see more.
Thank you for commenting. Chp 2 just about to post. Hope you like it. Crosses fingers!

10/04/2006 06:08 am
okay...you've hooked me...again.. i already like maria, am glad buffy's staying to help her...and maybe learn something about her feelings for spike in the process? great opening, love
Feeling guilty about hooking!! But only a little. I like to get my readers under my thumb early on! Just about to post Chp 2 which I hope you will enjoy as well. Thank you for reading.

10/04/2006 03:48 am
hehe I love this...Spike and Buffy back in time together.

10/04/2006 03:15 am
You can smell the privy – and the sewage in the streets. Unwashed bodies, rotting garbage, the smoke from a thousand chimneys. Tudor London, pet. - Ahh the age of manure. Wasn't so great in Spike's day either.

Excellent story Lilac - the little Slayer is very cute.
Thank you, yes I have great hopes of developing Maria, if not in this story, then in something else. I’ll see what people think.

idk5743228
10/04/2006 02:18 am
Loved the first chapter. Time travel is always fun. and as always you've captured Buffy and Spike beautifully
Thank you. Just about to post chp 2. It’s all good fun, not too angsty.