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Borrowed Time by msclawdia
Chapter: Older and Closer
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06/06/2010 05:22 pm
06/14/2009 07:41 pm
Hallie got her just desserts!
Cas
01/21/2007 05:20 am
Does conjure up a nice image.
Indeed. Spike in the shower is a nice image, I must agree :)
10/29/2006 10:14 am
I loved the choice of song for Spike to sing in the shower. The interaction between Hallie and Spike was much more interesting this time around. I liked how the vengeance spell was still done and the interesting twist on who made the wish.
I'd been looking for a way to use that song in story. Thanks!
vladt
10/12/2006 07:29 am
very good read, thank you. really enjoy the tale. buffy's note (lj drabble) is a pleasant spot in a wonderous, sad tale.
Thanks so much!
Glad you liked her note. I just had to get that little drabble out of my head before I could get this story written.
10/07/2006 01:43 am
I really hope that someone gets hip to Willow before it becomes too late. So happy to see Buffy and Spike acting like a real couple and not being in the shadows.
You'll just have to stay tuned... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10/06/2006 07:40 pm
spike singing in the shower was great...and i love how you had him deal with hallie being around...good job ;)
Thanks. Everytime I heard that song, I wanted to work it into a Spuffy story somehow. I was glad I found a fun way to do it.
pretty_in_fangs
10/06/2006 03:06 pm
Give in, Buffy! It's inevitable. ::giggle::
Heh.
10/06/2006 05:52 am
Oh I love this. This chapter is just fantastic...first with Dawn, you captured her perfectly. So few people write Dawn well...
Then...with Buffy and the slaying and spike...I loved the scene and what he got her...and how she was nervous about being waiting and posed for him...so cute.
I loved the anya and hallie and spike and buffy stuff. All of it...captured all those voices fantastically.
Great dream sequence, moving into the shower with Spike.
This entire chapter just flowed seamlessly from one thing to another and each voice was distinct and captured perfectly.
Also, the fact that you are still successfully twisting each episode, and keeping it on track is just amazing. Fantastic job. You should have been in charge of writing season six! :)
Then...with Buffy and the slaying and spike...I loved the scene and what he got her...and how she was nervous about being waiting and posed for him...so cute.
I loved the anya and hallie and spike and buffy stuff. All of it...captured all those voices fantastically.
Great dream sequence, moving into the shower with Spike.
This entire chapter just flowed seamlessly from one thing to another and each voice was distinct and captured perfectly.
Also, the fact that you are still successfully twisting each episode, and keeping it on track is just amazing. Fantastic job. You should have been in charge of writing season six! :)
Thanks! It was my discussion with you that got me thinking about putting in the Dawn section. (I should have thought to put that in my author's notes...) I was surprised at how much I like writing Dawn, but she's turned out to be one of my faves.
I appreciate all the great feedback.
10/06/2006 05:20 am
It's a Buffy Birthday! They did get Warren's location, whichnis great. She my not love him yet but she likes him and what he can do to her. Didn't this Buffy know who Cecily was to William? Xander seems to be keeping his mouth in check, way to go Xander. Weird prophecy. Great read, thanks.
Buffy didn't know who Cecily was, but I've alluded to it in this story before, via Spike's POV in All the Way. Thanks for all the feedback.
kim
10/06/2006 04:52 am
Cool...she's getting the dream already.
Nice take on the birthday.
And awww...warm and naked Spike...how can a girl resist?
Nice take on the birthday.
And awww...warm and naked Spike...how can a girl resist?
So glad you liked it!
10/06/2006 04:50 am
Lots of stuff going on in this chapter. Fantastic. Calling Giles or joining Spike in the shower? Can't believe Buffy even had to think about it.
Yeah... kind of a no-brainer... Thanks for reviewing!
Emily
10/06/2006 03:16 am
I love your writing, i just cant get enough. You have a great style, and you show each of the shows really well. I would write more, but i gotta run. Great job:D
Thank you so much!
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