Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Wild Justice

06/13/2007 10:00 pm
Wow. Just really ... wow.

03/09/2007 01:55 am
Love this story - very well done!I started reading Origins a few days ago and now I'm all caught up & anxiously awaiting more!

11/26/2006 06:44 am
glad angel and willow are both taken care of...wonder exactly what will happen to willow though...excellent chapter, all tied together very well :)

LeeAnne
10/20/2006 04:54 am
How nasty what Spike did to Angel! I loved it!!! More, more, more please!

10/17/2006 08:27 am
I don't know which was more satisfying, Spike dusting Angel, or the hounds capturing Willow?

Hmmm... nah... I loved them both equally!

Fabulous chap, my dear. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Bloodplay
10/16/2006 03:22 pm
Hello, Niamh,Took me a week but I sat down and finished your story. I am compltetly enthralled. I loved the way you portrayed the Neo-scoobs and can only hope you manage to intigrate the AI team as well (Fred, Gunn etc)I also hope there will be more interplay with the Englishmen in the future because its hilarious. those three really do have a lot in common and the way you portray it is seamless. Lawson, and the whole TARA/OZ thing was an unexpected but delightful twist. I Loved every second of it.
All in all the story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I was completely blown off my feet, barely tore myself away from it ALL OF IT> I read from the begining in Origins all the way to this chapter in the last week. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I need to see what happens. And I can't help but hope that Angel survived just so Spike can rub it in his face that he has everything he has ever wanted.
You made me hate Willow and Xander AND managed to wheedle out pairings out of the most unexpected people. KUDOS to you! I wait on your next update on breath that is bated.

PS - I even like some of the songs. ;)

10/13/2006 03:05 pm
oh god...soooo very very good. I just love this story, its very well written and it's full of many intrequing twists and turns all believable and spin tingling. but it doesn't finish, i hate cliffhangers! i can't wait to see what happens so please post some more

vladt
10/13/2006 04:19 am
wonderful read. so many fascinating thing going on: oz defending tara from a hellhound; red watching her magic ineffectiveness against the hellhound; guessing whose magic removed connor. bonus points for slow, painful angel dusting. thanks for a great read.

10/13/2006 02:36 am
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!! What is the world. Can I just tell you that more in love with this story right now. I can't believe it. Connor, Angel, Dru the hounds... so much.

Aonadharcach
10/12/2006 10:17 pm
Excellent couple of chapters, Niamh! I'm very much looking forward to the next. :)

margaret
10/12/2006 09:46 pm
great fight scenes as usual! sure hope connor'e ok

ariadne
10/12/2006 04:30 pm
i think my favorite part was when the alfa hound slapped willow on the roof. that was priceless and i can sooo see him doing that. i loved how he got up on roof and her magic could not be used against him. now that was a shock to little miss i think i'm all that witchy woman...

yeahhhh...angelus is dust!!! i do feel bad for dru tho. i imagine it will be hard for her to adjust. i hope someone can help her out.

what a chapter Nia. you totally rock and i can't wait for the next

Neart
10/11/2006 11:40 pm
Mother of god but I can't wait for the next chapter. Great scenes.

pretty_in_Fangs
10/11/2006 06:48 pm
Wow. I shoudl write a better review for such a great chapter but.. wow.

SpaceLord
10/11/2006 06:41 pm
Ohh nasty end for Angelus I must say :)

Can't wait for the next chapter.

sirc
10/11/2006 05:40 pm
Very gory, but still well done :D

10/11/2006 03:13 pm
Wow incredaible fic sweetie. This was really good chapter - how many are left out of curiosity do you know? The justice indeed was wild! Where did Connor go? Ohhhh details details I am so intrigued. Great story!

kim
10/11/2006 10:47 am
Intense!!!! Poor Connor! Where did he go???

Immensely well done. I was on the edge of my seat. Every emotion was so well conveyed - the terror, the anger, the grief, the madness...Tara's relief and renewed strength once Oz joined her side. Wes' brave knightly promise to do all he could for Dawn. Jenner rushing to catch Faith. All just...wow!

I knew you'd kill Angel, too. There was going to be no mercy in this fic after what he did to Dawn. Even if Willow had managed to do the soul spell, I think you still would have had a terrible fate waiting for Angel. Not sad to see Angelus gone, though I'm sad for Angel never getting to know his son. Life's a bitch.

Can't wait for what you've got for us next.

Bigbird
10/11/2006 09:08 am
Fantastic, absolutely fan fucking tastic!

Oracleholly
10/11/2006 08:11 am
Oh Goodie, goodie, gum drops and Angel dust!!! I've been a good little girl and lookee at what Auntie Niamh posted...WOW! *praying that Connor's okay* -- Ding dong Angel's dead! la la la la la

Sandyrah
10/11/2006 07:07 am
YAY!! FInally got rid of Angel, and the hounds got Willow. Good riddance to bad rubbish. More soon though. I wanna know what happened to Connor darn it. I love your stories. I reread them frequently.

10/11/2006 06:47 am
Oh, wow! Excellent! I finally got to see Spike actually take out Angelus. So often Angelus is protected because of the Angel factor. Thank you for finally killing him off. Great story and we still get to see the punishment of Willow. Looking forward to it. Thanks again.

Esther
10/11/2006 06:23 am
Whoa, mama, that was well worth the wait. OMG!!!! That was....I'm speechless!! Fantastic! Talk about action, suspense, and what an end to Angelus. WOW!! I'm still reeling from all the emotions I'm going through---just freaking awesome!! Splendid, splendid job!

10/11/2006 06:22 am
that was perhaps the best destruction of Angel that I've ever read....thank you

RandiGiles
10/11/2006 06:01 am
Oh. Thats a vivid way to go. Not that Angel didn't deserve to go that way. I just didn't expect it. I love the "You hurt my daughter line"

10/11/2006 05:58 am
Awesome fight scene's. Angelus dusted knowing that Spike would have more then one child, but what happened to Connor? Who sent him where? Willow or Tara? Hope Sam uses the opportunity of Dru's distration to finish her off. Nice that Giles and Anya had a romantic moment, hoping that Jenner was there to catch Faith. So exciting this was fabulous. Thanks for all your efforts, they are very much appreciated.

Seska
10/11/2006 05:41 am
Graphic Angel death, Xander humiliation and dog meat Willow - it just gets better and better!

Tamara
10/11/2006 05:30 am
Ganya kiss!

I really hope Tara is the one who sent the baby away.


Ding, dong! Angel's dead! Now for the wicked witch!

10/11/2006 04:52 am
*bows before your greatness* Spike dusted Angel :D

Do it again, do it again :D

10/11/2006 04:44 am
Wow!!!!! That was a GREAT chapter, I just don't know where to start. I hope Conner is okay. I am so glad that Angel is dust, and I can't wait to find out what The Huntsman has in store for Willow. Plus I liked the little Ganya scene

Emilee
10/11/2006 04:39 am
Yay! Angelus is gone, and Willow's about to get her judgement. But the baby! Where did she send the baby? And which "dead man" will be going to get him back? Of course I could be wrong in assuming that this is what Joyce was refering to. I can't wait for more so we can see. Excellent chapter. As always, I am in awe.