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Who Am I? by SciFi_GK
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Bleeding tragic taste in men
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valdt
10/17/2006 08:20 am
great read, thank you. clueless riley, very good; buffy:“Don’t do anything gross with my body or I’ll stake you,†excellent.
It just fit. I especially liked the cheeky way Spike smirks at Riley when he says "Now, would **I** do that?!"
And we're all saying, "Oh, yes, you would!" LOL.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
And we're all saying, "Oh, yes, you would!" LOL.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kittenuno
10/16/2006 01:16 pm
Funny, poignant and utterly original. You just wanted to hit Riley with a two by four by the end of the chapter. You have written a fantastic story SciFi_Gk. Thank you.
LOL, he *was* rather pathetic, wasn't he? But, hey, that's what the voices in my head said, so that's what I did.
What? Don't look at me like that!
LOL.
Thanks for reading.
What? Don't look at me like that!
LOL.
Thanks for reading.
Squirly
10/16/2006 08:49 am
Well, I'll try this again. That was great! Love Spike's introspective in this story. His internal monologue is histerical. I truly think you've totally improved on the original! BTW, I think Gail rocks too. *waves* Hi, Gail!
Oh, thank you so much. I love to get that humor in there, cause that's how it is in the series. Though it's not always easy, it is rewarding. Thanks for stopping by, Squirly. It's always a pleasure. :-)
Squirly
10/16/2006 08:38 am
weird. You're speechless? LOL.
10/15/2006 06:42 pm
I am so glad that you posted these two chapters together. I loved how calm the real Buffy appeared before she knocked out Faith. I really hope that Buffy's not so delusional about needing a normal life that she will allow Riley any leeway with this. Seeing is much harder then just hearing about it. Thanks so much for the updates, I really enjoyed them.
Well...**pausing for a deep breath**, it's not lookin' good for Riley. This author has, let's just call them, **issues** with Riley. I wouldn't start planning the make-up sex.
But that's just me. LOL.
OTOH, I can't just get rid of him yet. I DO have some points to cover because this is a challenge response. So, as much as I would like to wave Riley off right now, he'll be around again. But, I'm thinking it'll be fun. Another chance at 'kick the soldier'. LOL.
Spike's gonna love it.
LOL, thanks for reading.
But that's just me. LOL.
OTOH, I can't just get rid of him yet. I DO have some points to cover because this is a challenge response. So, as much as I would like to wave Riley off right now, he'll be around again. But, I'm thinking it'll be fun. Another chance at 'kick the soldier'. LOL.
Spike's gonna love it.
LOL, thanks for reading.
nightshift
10/15/2006 02:41 pm
I'm enjoying your version much better than I enjoyed the episode. Looking forward to the rest.
Because, HEY, anything with more Spike is always better, right? LOL.
Thank you. ;-)
Thank you. ;-)
sirc
10/15/2006 09:44 am
well done :D
Thank you. ;-)
10/15/2006 09:41 am
I know, weird, a second review but I couldn't help it. I just read it again and *claps* Just love it. I forgot about Faith and Spike's little exchange, it was priceless. Spike did get a nice view, didn't he? Of course he wouldn't do anything gross to the body that he has currently thrown over his shoulder. Naw, not Spike! I'm so glad that you've gotten back to this fun fic, thanks again.
Oh, please! More than one review isn't weird, it's wonderful. Me and Muse thank you. :-)
And, Nah, it wouldn't even cross Spike's mind to do something gross to the body. Nuh uh, not Spike. He's innocence personified.
Riiiiiiiight. LOL
Thanks again.
And, Nah, it wouldn't even cross Spike's mind to do something gross to the body. Nuh uh, not Spike. He's innocence personified.
Riiiiiiiight. LOL
Thanks again.
10/15/2006 09:27 am
God I loved Spike little speech to Riley! It was perfect! I can so see him doing exactly that and exactly the way he said it. Awesome chapter. Loved how he braced himself for her to launch off of. He knows her so well. Now to get her passed everyone outside of the building. Fantastic read, thanks.
Spike really spoke up this chapter. I was angling for him to have one, maybe two, quippy lines, but Buffy refused to speak and Spike just stepped into the vaccuum. And, hey, it totally goes to state of mind of Buffy that she doesn't tell him to shut up.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. ;-)
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. ;-)
sheri
10/15/2006 09:03 am
absolutely lovin this story! can't wait for more!
Thank you so much.
kim
10/15/2006 06:56 am
Awesome...perfect Faith dialogue, perfect Spike comments...and true to Buffy being so pissed off that she's beyond words. She's reached that point where it's just cold calm as you get the job done.
And Spike got to make lots of fun of Riley, too - even better!
Almost over now...and Faith, it's not nice to lie...she didn't get that friendly with Angel over just one kiss.
And Spike got to make lots of fun of Riley, too - even better!
Almost over now...and Faith, it's not nice to lie...she didn't get that friendly with Angel over just one kiss.
Thank you. Faith had alot to say this chapter, and all of it cutting. She was so much fun! LOL. Buffy, on the other hand, had nothing to say. And Spike, well, as always, can't shut that guy up. LOL.
Btw, the sleeping with Angel thing is implied in the episode Enemies. If you watch it, she gets groiny with him before they go see the Mayor, and at the end of the ep, Angel says "I never wanted it to go that far." So...hey, poetic license. ;-)
Thanks for reading.
Btw, the sleeping with Angel thing is implied in the episode Enemies. If you watch it, she gets groiny with him before they go see the Mayor, and at the end of the ep, Angel says "I never wanted it to go that far." So...hey, poetic license. ;-)
Thanks for reading.
10/15/2006 06:36 am
hehehe Awesome chapter! Loved it! :) Wow...there is gonna be some riley fallout. heh.
Of course...Riley fallout is of the good, don'tcha know. **BEG**
Thanks for reading. ;-)
Thanks for reading. ;-)
10/15/2006 05:17 am
Ah - two wonderful chapters. I like your Spike. He's just the right combination of "still evil" and "falling for Buffy". Perfect.
THANK YOU! It's so HARD to get that balance. But that's the fun, right?
Thanks for reading. ;-)
Thanks for reading. ;-)
10/15/2006 04:59 am
lol...that ending was lovely...pure classic spuffy...i have to say, i kinda like faith, in spite of her evil-ness...riley on the other hand...just pathetic...glad she left him, great chapter and looking eagerly forward to more :)
Oh, yeah. Faith just wouldn't stop whispering in my ear. Sometimes the evil ones are the funest (it is too a word...today, anyway. LOL) to write. :D
Thanks for reading. ;)
Thanks for reading. ;)
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