Borrowed Time by msclawdia
Chapter: Entropy

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06/07/2010 02:05 am
 

Cas
01/21/2007 09:12 am
Not the trio? Glad this is all posted and finished already so I don't ahve to wait thru it all.

Nope, the trio has plenty of other nasty business to get up to though!

10/31/2006 02:20 am
Anya’s thoughts about Xander and her honeymoon were sweet and I loved how she corrected the customer when she was called Miss. I understand Buffy’s worry about Faith and loved Spike’s response about when he met her during the body switch.

Thanks. I really enjoy writing Anya, and if I were Buffy I would really be worried about Faith.

10/30/2006 11:10 pm
good chapter

Thanks!

Emily
10/21/2006 01:02 am
Oh! Poor Spikey baby! I'm sure he'll be fine (because you can't be *that* evil.. i hope) Thanks for the all the updates you've been able to do, despite the RL difficulties. Once again, I hope that all has, is and will be going well with the in-laws. And I'm glad that Baby is okay:D

You'll be able to better gauge my evilness when the beta gets back to me. Surviving the in-laws so far and Baby is much better. Thanks for reviewing!

pretty_in_fangs
10/20/2006 03:58 pm
Well, that was an unexpected ending.

Resolution on the way! Next chapter is with the beta.

10/20/2006 12:53 pm
:o oh no!

Dun dun dun! Stay tuned.

Lou
10/20/2006 10:06 am
I'm hopeful it takes more than a car smash up to dust Spike.

You'll just have to wait for the next chapter ;)

10/20/2006 08:02 am
wow...what a startling ending for that chapter..i cant wait to see what happens to him, though i have an uneasy feeling about it...does it involve the creepy trio, perhaps? and btw, you write the hot semi-smut so wonderfully, steamy and intense without being crude...beautifully done :)

Thanks so much! It's a big relief to hear the love scenes are coming off well.

valdt
10/20/2006 07:32 am
very good update, thank you. sending joyce for faith, exceptional; the deliberate car wreck, vote is still pending.

Thanks for the feedback. I hope you'll think the resolution is worth the tension.

10/20/2006 03:06 am
No worries Buff, he's all yours. Thanks for the unexpected update. Spike sure is insecure. Instead of reveling in Buffy's desire to explore his demon side, he complies under duress, all because she wishes it. Great chapter, MC.

Thanks for all the feedback, Verda. I was sorta thinking back to the whole 'vampire groupie' thing he accused her of in canon. Like maybe there's a niggling in the back of his brain that he's just the convenient, non-lethal vampire in her life.

And I think Buffy has to wonder too if she'd get off on the vampire part or be freaked out or what.

I have a draft going for the next part. I just hope people aren't underwhelmed by the wreck aftermath.

kim
10/20/2006 02:20 am
Ack! Car wreck? Ack! He doesn't have much time before sunrise.

Yes, I think Joyce is the best to send for Faith. By now, Faith will definitely be on good behavior around her. That's probably one of the things that Faith sincerely feels sorry about. And Buffy's gotta learn that people change. Especially as they grow up.

Happy to see Anya happy. :)

Thanks for all the great feedback!

10/20/2006 12:25 am
Awwww very sweet chapter? are we to the part yet that I'm gonna disagree with? When we get to it can you write an author's note to clue me in? *zoe this is the part you aren't gonna agree with* hehehe I need help here knowing what i'm not supposed to like lol.

Not yet. It might become obvious what's happening before we get there, but the last chapter is where I think you'll be all 'hmm, not how I would have played it.'

LindsayH
10/20/2006 12:20 am
Ms. Clawdia, you are a bad girl! What an evil cliffie! Tell your guests they cannot have your computer, Spike is in danger. But what a story. It just keeps getting better and better. I wonder who was in that other car? Council hitmen, Bringers, the Trio of Losers, ooh, the suspense! I love this story.

hehehe. Thanks for the review. I just hope the next installment doesn't disappoint!