Brave New World by JamesMFan
Chapter: Crater of Embarrassment

05/22/2010 05:34 pm

11/13/2006 07:26 pm
WOW! Ingenius story! Amazing job with the characters and their emotional traumas. There were definitely a couple of times that you had me in tears just with your imagery: Buffy seeing the holograph of Giles and Buffy seeing Angel for the first time. But the most moving part to me was the way you described Angel finally getting his freedom to be imprisoned. WOW! That sentence still gets to me as I write this. Can't wait to read more.

10/23/2006 03:50 am
very good chapter, thank you. faithhaving buffy under house arrest shoul be very entertaining.

10/22/2006 05:13 pm
Buffy/Faith = TNT. Look out Brave new world. wonderful chapter

10/22/2006 09:06 am
Well done

10/22/2006 08:02 am
I can completely understand Buffy's upset over Spike quitting for her. Faith, what an interesting person to call. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.

10/22/2006 03:14 am
What else could he do except refused the case but that doesn't mean that they would have let him. Now Buffy can't live with him anymore which really sucks in it's self. How are they supposed to get together now? Poor Norman, that was mean of Buffy to tease him like that. Yup Faith would be the only one left. Wondering how that's going to go. Great chapter JM thanks.

10/22/2006 01:27 am
LOL.....wonder what Faith grabbed then *G*.

Excellent update. Poor Spike between a rock and a hard place. Stupid Buffy not to reward 30 plus years of devoted love....sigh......then again it's only been a short time for her.


10/22/2006 01:02 am
Awesome chapter! I love the line from buffy, that complete dead panned: "yes, we're secret lovers." hahaha.

I feel so bad for Buffy and for Spike. I really wish they'd just run away together and hide out somewhere, get new identities or something. Surely there's somewhere they can hide. Maybe they could travel back in time to the past or something and escape that way. OK shutting up now, i know it's your story and I trust you with it.

10/22/2006 12:34 am
Good thinking!

10/22/2006 12:11 am
lol...that last bit with faith cracked me up...oh she and buffy are gonna make *great* roommates!! looking forward to your next chappie, pet