Borrowed Time by msclawdia
Chapter: Lost and Found

05/19/2015 02:35 am
This would be a great ending if there were a sequel - but I also would have said WTH if it had ended here. 

Cas
01/22/2007 02:36 am
Loved the photo, and Buffy from Faith's point of view. Glad that you add the epilogue.

Thanks. I decided to last chapter was too confusing. I also got a lot of 'what the hell?!?' feedback :)

10/31/2006 03:09 am
I like that Buffy and Faith seem to be getting along. I loved Buffy’s joy at having Spike back and could understand her confusion and reaction when she realized he had a soul.

Thanks again! I know many readers were taken aback by what I'm doing here, but Buffy's only experience with soul v non-soul having vamps has her thinking this might be a totally different guy than the one she fell in love with. So she's freaked.

10/26/2006 12:45 am
wonderful read, thank you. marvelous end to this section of the tale. buffy always was so insightful. not!

Thank you so much!

Emily
10/25/2006 07:13 am
Argh! This is the 4th time I have written this review and everytime it is getting worse and worse. I'll try to recapture what I wrote the first time ::rolls eyes::

Wow. What a sudden, unexpected, completely AMAZING ending. I have read many a Spuffy fic, but never have I encountered a reaction like this. I just love it. Although it leaves us a tad hanging (I would diiee before missing out on the epi+sequel), I love how you took the risk to do it your way, and i think it turned out really effectively. Great job! :love

Thanks so much, Emily. (And I appreciate your persistence. I've had time-outs occur on this site a few times too. FRUStrating!)

I'm so glad you liked the ending. I know a lot of people were thrown (as expected), but I think some understood what I was doing and the epilogue seems to have cleared up a lot of it. Or so I hope.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I've still got a few things to decide about the sequel, but I have some scenes written already. So hopefully it will start showing up soon.

Lou
10/24/2006 08:54 pm
Aaah - give the guy a break!

Heh.

10/24/2006 03:32 pm
Great story and I love the way you managed all of the twists and turns. Surprise ending! I look forward to the epilogue and sequel. Thanks fora great read.

Thank you so much! The epilogue is up. The sequel is still in the planning stages.

pretty_in_fangs
10/24/2006 01:39 pm
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I concur with your beta. what an evil ending! ::laugh:: One moment we're basking in the warm fuzzies with Buffy and then next she has a stake. !!!!!!!

Thanks! The epilogue is up. There's less evil there :)

10/24/2006 01:38 pm
argh!! omg... why would she stake him!?! I dont want it to end... please please please make a sequel!!!

She wouldn't stake him, but she would threaten him if he doesn't tell her what he did with 'her' Spike. The epilogue is up now, which will hopefully clear things up a bit. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

willowmouse
10/24/2006 11:18 am
I think my heart stopped when I read "The End" - yes, please, epilogue is needed. This was/is brillant & when your done, I'm going to sit in a dark room and read it start to finish :)

Thank you! The epilogue is up!

Tamara
10/24/2006 06:13 am
Epilogues are good, epilogues showing points from sequel are even better.

Heh. Thanks. Well the epilogue is written, and the sequel is in the planning phase.

10/24/2006 06:08 am
Oh, I am in shock, I just don't know what to say, that is the last reaction I thought Buffy would have to the soul. But I am waiting with bated breath for the epilgue. So this is what you meant by pushback. but you have written a wonderful story so I will trust that everything will work out.

I appreciate your trust. She's not going to stake Spike or anything. She's just wigged. I'm hoping I've done a good job of expressing that in the epilogue, which I'll be posting soon. Thanks for the feedback!

10/24/2006 05:57 am
yes, cruel ending indeed! very lovely fic...can't wait for the next story, love...looking forward to it immensely :)
Thanks! I will post the epilogue as soon as it's proofed. Hopefully folks will see where I'm going with this when it's up.

10/24/2006 05:45 am
OK i read some of your review replies, and I guess i can see that, how she might think that Spike wasn't her Spike. I still don't think she'd want to stake him. he has a soul, and she might want him to leave or be freaked out, but why would she try to stake him?

But I know she won't stake him and I know you're going to clear it up.

She wouldn't stake him, but she would threaten him for info on what he's done with her Spike. Thanks for sticking with me. I really think the epilogue will make what she's thinking clearer.

10/24/2006 05:43 am
omfg that's cruel leaving it there. what? why would she want to stake him? I mean I knew you said she was going to react differently but WTF???

10/24/2006 05:41 am
omfg that's cruel leaving it there. what? why would she want to stake him? I mean I knew you said she was going to react differently but WTF???

Yeah, I was expecting some of that...

10/24/2006 05:38 am
Sequel? You did say sequel, didn't you? Cos if you leave it hanging like this with no sequel... well, that would just be cruel and downright evil. I really loved this fic and definitely want more. Sooo... hurry! Uh, please???

Thank you so much! There will be an epilogue as soon as it comes back from editing, and then I'm going to start working on a fuller sequel.

10/24/2006 05:36 am
Well your beta was right. Leaving it there would have been very very cruel. Thats why the news of an epilogue and sequel are very welcome. Great story! I'll be looking forward to the rest. =)

Thanks! The epilogue is with my over-worked beta. Hope to post it soon.

kim
10/24/2006 03:47 am
I don't think she'd treat him like a stranger, which is what her wording suggests....grabbing for her stake, for a souled being? That's just weird, considering Buffy's soul=good philosophy. Even with Angel/Angelus, she knows that they both have the same memories. Yeah, the feelings are different, but the memories are all shared and intact.
But he's not even acting like he's not her Spike....she's really being a bit irrational.

Loved everything else from the last two chapters. You've mentioned the Bringer killings, and the girls are all powered up, so the sequel is going to be pretty interesting, with their advance notice army. And of course, I'm thrilled that Joyce and Tara are still alive.

Well, keep in mind that we know that Spike with a soul is still Spike... just with a soul. But Buffy doesn't know that. Her experience has taught her that vamp+soul and vamp-soul are two totally different guys who just remember stuff the other one did. And Spike-soul is a man she loves who loves her back. For all she knows, he's 'William' now, and she knows nothing about William.

I expected to get some 'what the hell' reactions to this chapter. Hopefully I'll be able to clear things up a little for people in the epilogue.

Emilee
10/24/2006 03:18 am
Well thank god for your beta, because just leaving it there would definitely be cruel and unusual torture. I'm glad you're planning a sequel, because you did leave a lot of loose ends, and the story is just excellent so I can't wait for more. Thanks so much for such a delightful story.

Thanks so much for all the reviews! The epilogue is with Kar already. I will post it ASAP.

Jessica
10/24/2006 02:43 am
I completely agree that that would be mean to leave it there. I don't think I've ever seen that reaction from Buffy about the soul. I love it. Looking forward to more.

I'm working in the epilogue now! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/24/2006 02:33 am
Wow! That was a completely unexpected ending. ???

I've really loved this story, but the ending was a real show stopper. ;) Really glad there's going to be an epilogue to smooth things out. Right?

Thanks! I hope the epilogue will explain a little what's going on in Buffy's head.

10/24/2006 01:54 am
Okay, that was dumb of her. Why would she think he was another person? It's Spike, with a soul...duh!

So, the Slayer spell is done, Xander's buried, Anya's still a mess, Giles is still gone...And Faith and Buffy are almost getting along.

I'll explain it more in the epilogue but remember that there's a huge difference between Angel with and without his soul, and that's the only experience Buffy has with this (whereas we know better). Buffy is in love with Spike, and if the guy on her couch is 'William' or whoever, she's not going to be happy.

Stephanie
10/24/2006 01:52 am
Ok, I'm glad I read that last author's note before I left a review cuz I was gonna yell. You can't just leave it like that. But now that I see you aren't I will just say that the story is awesome and I can't wait for the epilogue and the sequel. Hurry please.

So glad you want more! Thanks. I've got the epilogue drafted. Should get it posted tomorrow.

Stephanie
10/24/2006 01:50 am