Interesting that both Spike and Dawn wondered why people weren't moving to help Buffy, as if the reality was too much that they couldn't comprehend it. i really liked Giles giving Buffy's body to Spike when he asked, and that no one commented on his carrying her away. It was interesting to see the combinations and that Giles got left taking care of Dawn, although Tara clearly wanted to. The trek with her body through the sewers back to the house was very well done.

Wow, you picked a hard scene to write, but you did really well with it.

well, when the muse wakes up, he really goes to work! this is great stuff, desi.

and thanks so very much for the dedication.

Thank you so much Space, for bring this heart breaking scene to life. Since we never got to see Joss' version, I think he'd like it. Everyone in shock and dealing with her death. We all know, if given the chance, that is just what Spike would have done, what all of them would have done. So happy to know that you're putting this and "YHWLYH" together as a series. I'm not the only one who's missed it. Great chappie, thanks.

WOW! I can't say anything else because I'm speechless from the beautiful imagery of their grief.

That was so moving. What a stunner of a story -- exceptionally well written too. Can't wait for more.

wonderfully written, sad chapter. thanks for the fine read.

Awesome story! Ihopeihopeihopeihope there will be no writer's block.....anxiously awaiting next chapter (s)!!! LOL

Nice chapter, Space. Surprised they didn't just leave Spike stranded.

Great chapter.

Just wanted to drop a line and say that this is a good story. It does seem like the show left a lot of moments just sitting there, with no follow through or transition. It's really interesting to see what you think those lost moments were like. Plus, I love the Xander in your story. I'm also currently reading DoS's "Because He Needs Me," and needless to say, that Xander scares the crap out of me. Your Xander is a nice guy. The whole story is sad anyway, but when he just offered a boost to Giles, silently, well, that's when I started crying. Seeing the group bond together in your story makes the way they fell apart on the show all the more tragic. Good luck with the continuing story! Oh, and a Wes/Spike sandwich? Heck yeah!

Very well done, displaying the shock and start of grief.

This chapter was so sad, the closing scene nearly broke my heart. :( You did an amazing job of capturing the intense moments following Buffy's death. I especially liked getting the painful glimpses into Spike and Dawn's heads. Wonderful update.

awww... you're gonna make me cry! I can literally feel Spike's pain... great update! Looking forward to the next!! :)

awwww that is so sad. It had me in tears!