The Worst Betrayal by TwilightChild
Chapter: Dreams and Omens

01/20/2007 03:48 pm
Intriguing beginning!

01/16/2007 10:24 pm
very good place to pause, for it will take a very long time for that thought to penetrate buffy's closed mind. very good read, thank you.

Lou
01/16/2007 08:42 pm
Good start! I think there's some Scooby illusions about to be shattered.

Kristen
01/15/2007 08:53 am
That was a great start! Cant wait to see where this is going. Hope you update soon!

01/15/2007 04:57 am
Oooh this is good. I love how Buffy was constantly trying to deny what her heart already knows. I think she's about to get a very ugly wake-up call. You really need to update, and soon.

01/15/2007 01:11 am
You've got my complete attention! What an interesting concept. Glad Bitchy Buffy's having the dream's and Spike's avoiding her. Looking forward to this. Thanks TC, what a great start.

01/15/2007 12:13 am
i love it, pet....very well done...excellent, intriguing and original premise...i dont think i've read anything quite like this before, and i'm looking forward to reading more of it (hehe...i get to read it before anybody else does )

01/14/2007 10:29 pm
Very intriguing beginning to your story. I look forward to reading more.

01/14/2007 10:24 pm
Hmmm, very interesting and Buffy is so cruel and cold. Makes me shiver.

Cas
01/14/2007 08:54 pm
oooh, Angel not so special as he likes to believe? But can he convince her? Intriguing start, anxious to see where this goes.

Inzey
01/14/2007 08:44 pm
Great beginning, hope to read more soon.

01/14/2007 08:16 pm
Ooooo great start! I am intrigued completely. I suspect our boy Spike was a souled one since he seemed pretty souled from time to time in canon. Scared the pants off me with the opening. I am assuming those were twists on the alley scene that her dreams have been giving her.

Stupid Buffy doesn't even recognize the lurching of her heart is love. What an ass.

Excellent, as I said. I have just listed you as a favorite author because it is clear I will want to read anything you write. Don't want to miss an update or a new story.

Kathleen

BT_
01/14/2007 07:13 pm
huh - now THERE's an interesting beginning!

01/14/2007 05:36 pm
Ah, there's the Buffy we know and somewhat loathe--repressing her emotions, acting high and mighty, and getting it handed to her by a demon who doesn't fit into her neat black and white world! Good start, TC, thanks for writing!