She gets right to the point, doesn't she?

What a cool vamp Buffy -- much better than the timid variety!

I love the way you writers are so creative. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!

well Elizabeth certainly is full of arrogance and a sense of her own importance. I wonder what William will be like when he awakens, as it seems he won't be exactly what she was expecting from the birth mark

I like this story. You need to update soon! I want to see what happens when William becomes Spike. :)

Interesting and dark, can't wait to read more

very interesting start. do not expect buffy to be much of a sire, but she did leave him breakfast. very good read, thank you.

Yup, count me among those who don't really care for her but Spike loves her and since I want for him to be happy, she works. Just Bitchy Buffy, like we've seen so many times before. Good to know that she'll change at some point. Can't stand her being a bitch forever. Very interesting twist, I like it!

Oh, great start, can't wait to read when he wakes. I don't think Buffy will be that great of a sire.

How feral. Love the graveyard scene.

very promising start! Cant wait for more..

How sweet, Elizabeth left a snack. Very interesting start.

oooh...how chilling..i like this version of buffy, looking forward to seeing how things go when spike wakes up :)

Interesting beginning. I like it.

Very, interesting and well described. Please, update soon, I'll be waiting. Thanks.

Like it - so far, so intriguing! More orignial take than most as well. Looking forwards to the next chapter.

Oh this is going to be good I like the fact Buffy the sire and Spike the childe for a change...It a nice quirk to the whole...Question can vampires die if they break their necks like I know if you behead them they dust but breaking one neck isn't actually removing the head is it? Up date soon please Spikes Mrs....