The Worst Betrayal by TwilightChild
Chapter: Pockets and Slaves

01/16/2007 10:30 pm
leave it to dawn to ask the important question. good chapter, thank you.

01/16/2007 08:50 pm
Buffy is due some serious guilt!

01/16/2007 06:21 am
Oh I can only imagine how much chaos this is going to cause in the Scoobies human=good, demon=evil world. I can't wait to see the uproar!

I love how Anya's little slip went unnoticed. Seems to me like she's only a demon in a human body.

I can't wait for you to update this!

01/16/2007 06:18 am
Oh crap! He'd be so easy to ask for a soul. He'd do anything for Buffy. What a great idea for a story. If he's there though, who's going to go with her? Leave it to Dawn to worry about the vampire. At least Buffy thought of him as a demon who could love. Hope you can update again soon. Thanks, very good chapter.

01/16/2007 04:37 am
I read the first chapter of this fic last night and was intrigued. Now, with this second chapter, you've officially gotten me hooked. Neat premise. And of course, you've gotten us very concerned about Spike's fate. Can't wait to read more.

01/16/2007 01:24 am
Hum.....could it be that Seeing Red was a delusion for Spike and the go to Africa for a Soul was part of their insidious plan????? *G* However you decide to play this it's excellent. Wish these idiots would care for the beings that are enslaved and forget the whole soul/no soul crappola (and Pullllllease...."Are they after Angel" GAG but in character, that wasn't meant as a criticism of YOU, just of stupid Buffy).


01/15/2007 11:48 pm
Ah, its Dawn who asks the hard questions! And yeah, it certainly is unusual for her to ever be quiet!

01/15/2007 11:47 pm
Cool idea. Looking forward to the explanation of how vampires get tricked into requesting a soul.

01/15/2007 11:40 pm
This is a great story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see where this goes!

01/15/2007 10:34 pm
The whole time I read it, I sat thinking "Where is Spike? Where is Spike?"
Great chapter, looking foreward to the next.

01/15/2007 10:30 pm
Oh, boy, Buffy's explanation is going to be interesting. LOL. Can't wait to see where you take this. Please, update soon. Thanks.

01/15/2007 10:28 pm
love it, pet...looking forward to seeing where it goes from here, too...and how buffy reacts when she realizes that spike's been taken..if indeed he has, which it's certainly starting to look that way