Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire by wolf116
Chapter: L.A. Traffic

02/17/2007 08:58 pm
good chapter, thank you. love faith's attitude.
Thank you

02/13/2007 12:35 pm
I enjoyed Faith's conversation with Robin, I love how insightful she is. Good update!
Cool. Glad you enjoyed Faith. I was worried about how her character would come across, so far everyone has enjoyed it. Hopefully I can stick with it and keep her in character. Well the season 7 version of her anyway.

02/13/2007 10:05 am
Just made it seam like a longer chapter, is all! Really glad that Faith put it out there. Guess they all had some idea but don't think any of them wanted to admit it. So this has all been in her mind. Should of figured but still tring to figure out how Spikes there? Well now, Guess Angel's going to find out that Spike, not he, is the one she's in love with. Can't wait for that to happen. But they aren't they're anymore, they're at W&H!. Looking forward to more, thanks for the great update.
Well that's what everyone on the bus thinks but the answer will be coming as to exactly what happened.

Hopefully chapter 23 will answer at least one of your points.

Thanks.

clarityfades
02/13/2007 01:01 am
don't worry, the chapter was totally readable...and re-readable. i'm liking this insight in the other side. hmm, will angel and AI even be at the hotel? and if not, will the scoobies take it over? i hope so!can't wait to read more!
Hopefully Chapter 23 will answer your questions.

Thanks

Lou
02/13/2007 12:46 am
A suitably fraught arrival in LA.
HE! HE! I could just see Giles getting fed up and throwing around British slang. Couldn't get it out of my head so I had to write the chapter.

02/12/2007 11:20 pm
like this chapter from faith's pov...very interesting to see her perspective...and can't wait to see what happens next :)
Thank you so much. I hope you continue enjoying the story.

02/12/2007 09:04 pm
Formatting was fine. I'm still thinking "huh?" now that we're back to the bus. Like your Faith characterization.
There is reason I promise.

Thank you for the compliment on Faith.