Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Justice turns the scale

06/13/2007 11:06 pm
Whoa ... heavy chapter, but well written.

Richard
03/01/2007 06:33 am
I'm pretty surprised Buffy spared her life. It's not where the story seemed to be leading with Buffy distancing herself from Willow and the Celtic gods being bloodthirsty. It's not the smart thing to do either since there's any number of ways Willow could become extremely dangerous. And you can bet she'd explore every one of them. Mind you, it is justice, but I wasn't expecting justice at this point.

02/28/2007 07:14 pm
wow, sounds like quite a hefty penalty for willow..i almost feel sorry for her...*almost*...and i'm glad spike's doing all right, and i hope buffy can handle seeing willow's penalty handed down...great chapter, very much enjoyed it :)

02/28/2007 04:01 pm
ohhh so good so good, I want to read the rest but I dont want it to finish!!

Emilee
02/28/2007 02:19 pm
Would it be a safe bet to figure Willow still has absolutely no concept of how she screwed up? Strip her powers and take her friends away, she'll just end up an evil human. Still dangerous even without the power. Buffy's too soft-hearted. I don't know if I'd have let her live, at least not without hearing her speak for herself. Excellent chap as always. Can't wait for more.

Lou
02/28/2007 12:04 pm
Retribution is on its way. I love this story!

02/28/2007 11:20 am
That is very powerful writing. I could feel it. I could feel Arianrhod as he made his wise decision. I'm hoping that they all out live her, she deserves nothing less. That was awesome, Niamh. Will wait for any update for this amazing story, thanks.

02/28/2007 06:54 am
*That* is an effective curse. I don't know that having her life spared is going to be Willow's desire when she discovers the actuality of those restrictions. The loss of control is really going to hurt. Looking forward to more (always).

02/28/2007 06:28 am
Great chapter.
"Release comes not, until the last of your betrayed is at peace." Wow, Willlow will have to wait a long time.

02/28/2007 06:17 am
death would have been mercy. loved it, thank you.

Pin
02/28/2007 04:17 am
I like the way you present the hall and the judging. I'll be interested to see what the judgement means and how Willow will react.