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Invite Me In by Spikez_tart
Chapter: Wait for Someone
03/01/2007 08:46 pm
Nitpicking from a martial artist. Buffy has slayer strength. She didn't need that many punches to KO human Riley. Otherwise great chapter!
Nitpicking happily accepted. Of course, Buffy enjoyed beating the snot out of him and Riley is a pretty strong guy and full of super strength vitamins.
03/01/2007 08:41 pm
Nooo, only one more. *sigh* lol, well I guess that's ok. I really enjoyed this chapter, and Riley, ewww. He's a dog in heat ROFL humping her leg, lmao. Can't wait for more.
Only one more, but I'm thinking about the sequel and I really really hope it won't take a year to write. Thanks for reviewing.
03/01/2007 05:36 pm
awwww...this chapter was so sweet, and very very funny...ive enjoyed this fic so much, pet, you've done an excellent job with it...lookng forward to that last chapter ;)
Just have to tie up a few ends and set the hook for the next sequel. Taking my cue from you on that. Heh heh.
03/01/2007 02:17 pm
I know that Walsh will punish Finn but I was hoping for at least some teeth knocked out or a crushed skull, darn. but they got Spike out and that's all that matters. So he really did just ask her to marry him. *claps* So happy to know that you're writing a sequel to this. So much more to do and then there's the baby too! Can't wait for the wedding and see what job Spike's going to get, per Joyce. Thanks, ST, really enjoying this series.
I think Spike's going to have a tough time with the job idea. I had to nearly starve him to death to get him married. Thanks.
Cas
03/01/2007 01:30 pm
whew, a lot happened in this chapter. That bit with Riley's chip, hilarious, but ewww! And are you going to give Buffy Spike's last name? Waiting to see what you come up with.
She's definitely going to be Mrs. Spike. I'm trying to see just how long I can string out the bit with the name. Joss managed for six years.
Lou
03/01/2007 10:25 am
Great visual -- Riley humping Buffy's boot! And such a sweet reunion -- and I love the cool techno action!
Thanks. I like fun military stories.
03/01/2007 07:02 am
Oooh, and Buffy finally gets a marriage proposal on a daylight cruise...er, rescue mission. How vewwy womantic. Still trying to get the Riley boot humping vision out of my brain, though. Eeewww.
Okay, the humping thing was gross - but Riley is a dog.
zombiegirl
03/01/2007 05:04 am
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks.
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