very good chapter, thank you. enjoy the way you deal out bits and pieces.

See now you just clinched it..... :) you just turned me into an A1 reviewer! I can say all day i will stop until its finished but in truth i am so addicted i couldn't stop reading if i really wanted too,, it calls to me "new chapter in,, new chapter in better find out what happens!!!!" More than likely what will happen is when this is finally finished I will reread the series completely (again btw) and try to suck out every tidbit of detail i might have missed the last (few) times i have read them. Isn't that what you do to really good stories? read and reread?

Loved the glimpse's into the future, I like how neatly Oscar is fitting into the fabric of the story. Can't wait to find out if Oscar has his first meeting with little Joni. Wonderful chapter!

So much pain and an amazing tale. I'm going to have to read them both over from start to finish when this is done.

Yes, get her before she's hit by a car, or God knows what else.

So Oscar's a time traveler.....

ahhhhhhhh!!!! Its making more and more sense the pieces are slowly fitting together! Part of me want the easy way and stop reading this chapter by chapter and just wait until your done so i can read it all together but another part of me is to curious to just WAIT! GReat chapter! I will probably in the end do both!