A New Day by Joyful Dayz
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Closing the Hellmouth

05/27/2007 07:13 am
{claps and cheers} Excellent chapter!! Bravo on how you rewrote each event in this one.
Thanks! I thought Dawn needed a little fun, too. I doubt her "keyness" just disappeared after the portal closed in season 5.

03/23/2007 12:49 pm
That was wonderful. Dawn did deserve a little fun now didn't she? Great way to incorporate her age when Buffy's age when she became a slayer and Spike's inability to burn with his mating. Just loved how it all turned out. Great rewrite, thanks.
Thank you so much!

03/19/2007 05:20 am
woot! awesome! great work! Can't wait to see more.
Jace
Thank you so much! I've posted the rest of the story now. :)

03/15/2007 03:43 am
fine read, thank you. enjoyed your solution to the problem. and i chuckled with spike at his last line.
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments through the story.

Tamara
03/15/2007 12:53 am
Excellent workaround on sharing the power without activating the potentials. Plus this way the power was also shared with the non potentials too.
Thank you! I thought killing so many people off was just futile of the authors - they just couldn't let anyone be happy.

03/14/2007 09:42 pm
Great chapter. Great that neither Spike didn't die!
Thank you! I appreciate your comments throughout the story. :)