More Than A Myth by KaylaTM
Chapter: Scent

06/13/2007 05:44 am
This is a great premise for an AU fic. I'm so curious about Joyce and Agatha and how they're wrapped up with Spike ... and if Buffy is just an ordinary girl or if there's something else going on. Reading more now ...
Thank you, Verity Watson! I'm glad that you like my lil' story so far! The mystery does up the intrigue quiet nicely doesn't it? *wink* *said in a coy voice* You'll just have to keep reading to find out its' secrets...

03/30/2007 07:56 am
spike has it bad, whatever it is. aunt aggie is a joy (so far.) very good read, thank you.
Yes. Yes, indeed, Spike does have it bad... Whatever 'it' is.

Thanks for reviewing!

BloodyLuv
03/21/2007 09:01 pm
simply brilliant!! i am very intrigued, cant wait to know what happens next!!
Aww, you are too kind!

So...Brilliant, huh? *blushes prettily*

Thank you for reviewing!

03/18/2007 06:20 pm
Very exciting. What's wrong with Spike? Can't wait to find out.
Some things about Spike should be cleared up in the very next chapter. So stay tuned to find out! *wink*

desertrose
03/18/2007 02:36 am
Yeah there might be a concern or two there.

WONDERFUL amazingly good start to the story. I very much look forward to it all.
Aw, thank you. It means a lot to know that so many people are enjoying this story so far.

ella
03/17/2007 11:29 pm
I have lots of questions, but I'm living in hope that you'll answer them soon. :) Please, update soon!
And I shall answer your questions...eventually. Until then, my advice would be to go out and buy a Magic 8 ball and ask those same questions. Haha. There is no finer method than that.

03/17/2007 11:04 pm
What an original story, I love Aunt Aggie already. I hope it was Angel that Joyce was involved with and not Spike, Angel is the one who leaves someone for their own good. I really hope that Buffy is a slayer, so she is Spikes equal. Keep writing this wonderful fic, and I will keep reading :)
Thank you so much for reviewing!

Aggie is a sweet ol' bitty isn't she? I love her, too. We should all have Aunt Aggies... Especially if they all come included with a hot British caretaker named Spike.

Hmmm. *off in my happy place*

Kimber
03/17/2007 08:21 pm
I just had a thought. The princess in the story is Joyce's mother or grand mother. And the pale knight did not leave the princess, she died. Interesting we have Great Aunt Aggie, but no grieving parents for Joyce. Does Buffy look like this person, or does she share their slaylinage and it calls to his demon.....you've really intrigued me with this one.....I just hope if he was romantically involved he can convey to Buffy his love for her is different and not because....well you know....LOL
That is very intelligent insight...

I'm not going to tell you if you're right or wrong, but those are all very well thought out guesses.

smlcspike
03/17/2007 07:55 pm
Please don't tell me that they are father and daughter, I am writing one but I want a love seen because I think they have the right cemestriy in this fic.
Um, no, they're not father and daughter. That much I'll tell you.

And thank you for the complement. It's good to know that the chemistry between Spike and Buffy is evident.

Kimber
03/17/2007 05:59 pm
Damn, next chapter please, like yesterday........
Getting a little antsy to find out what happens next, huh?

tis-kit
03/17/2007 02:41 pm
Wonderfully vivid, powerful writing. I particularly love the way you have expressed Buffy's grief. The following lines really captivated me:

"Three times. Aggie had mentioned Joyce’s name three times in the last five minutes. Yet the world hadn’t ended."

The last couple of scenes up the intrigue and I am now clamouring for more!
Thank you. It makes an author feel good to know that something they wrote captivated a reader.

*huggles*

03/17/2007 01:31 pm
A little too late for Mandy to try to become a friend for Buffy on her last day there... it doesn’t sound as if Buffy leaves too many good memories there behind her.
Agatha is far more nicer to her, more like a family member than Hank treats her. I wonder if Joyce learned to do her chocolate from her.
Heh heh… that’s because Buffy thought Spike was a dog. He doesn’t like to be up early? Mmmh (reminds me of a certain vampire). As does the sent thing and Buffy’s head feeling heavy and her mind foggy. Like the eye contact caught them in a thrall. Huh, Spike doesn’t want to get touched by Buffy? He’s acting weird. *nods* And he definitely is a vampire.... And tempted by Buffy. More than a normal human? Seems so.
Looking definitely forward to read more :-D
Thank you for the review, Cordykitten. I'm glad you still like how my story is going!

Avalon
03/17/2007 01:27 pm
I definitely want to get to know more of the Buffy-Joyce-Agatha-Spike triangle... mmmm... square :P
Triangle-squares. My favorite.

Mary
03/17/2007 09:34 am
Interesting story so far. But, please tell me Spike & Joyce weren't a couple, that would just be icky.
You're right, that would be icky...

*still beat*

But one never knows what could happen.

Well, except for me. I know.

Thanks for the review!

03/17/2007 08:12 am
*pouts* That's all? I could read this all night! It's great. Spike's an old friend of the family huh? Is Agatha a retired slayer? Got to twenty-five and got to live out her life? Bet Spike was there the whole time, what fought by her side? Knew Joyce as a little girl? Is Buffy to become a slayer after all? Is that what he smells in her blood? Is that why he wants to kill her? His demon knows what she is? This is going to be fantastic. Wonder what Agatha's going to say about all of this. Can he stay there, all the while wanting to kill her? Hoping that you will be able to update regularly? So good, thanks.
Aaaw, you're so sweet. You make me want to post this story all night so you could read it.

...Unfortunately, this is a Work In Progress, and I fear that if I updated nightly it would come out as insane ramblings.

So...no more pouty? *pouts right back*

Jessica
03/17/2007 08:04 am
Great note. ; ) I loved the chapter. Their meeting was rather explosive wasn't it? But my favorite part would have to be Aggie hitting Spike with the newspaper. Just priceless. Can't wait for more.
Haha! Yeah, I thought the newspaper bit was appropriate because of the fact that Buffy thought Spike was a dog.

Actually, before this chapter got beta'd I had him being twacked a lot more... I guess I got a little, er, too enthusiastic.

But really, you can never have too many Spike Spankings, am I right?

dicecanntcry
03/17/2007 05:46 am
Questions? Yeah I'd say i nave a question or two, like what the heck is going on?!?! lol.

Very interesting story! I'm quite curious as to what all you have in store. :) More please!
That...is exactly the reaction I was expecting.

Looks like you'll have to keep reading this story to find out your answers, huh? *winks*

maraina
03/17/2007 04:59 am
Thoroughly engrossing start here despite the circumstances still being so mysterious. The scene with Mandy & Buffy in the bedroom, and later with her *swallows in order to be able to say the word past the bad taste in her mouth* 'father' was so very banal in its reality that it throws the strangeness Buffy's found herself surrounded by in Sunnydale into even greater contrast by comparison. So...questions. Is Spike what I think he is (i.e. VAMPIRE)? What's Buffy (e.g. human relative/descendant, Slayer, potential/destined mate, future dinner item)? Who's Aggie (e.g. the woman in the story Joyce told in the first chapter, a descendant of said woman, no relation whatsoever to her but fortunately some kind of relative to Buffy)? Oh and most importantly - WHEN are you gonna update again, lol? *smiles brightly*
Those...are all very good questions. And I wish I could answer them...but it would kind of give all of the plot away. Ruin the suspense, you know?

But never fear, all shall be revealed...at some point. So keep those questions in mind.

Was that vague and side-steppy enough for you?

Oh, but I will give you this: Spike is a vampire. And if he wasn't, then he would be one twisted individual don't you think? All those blood-lusty thoughts. Eek.

Randie
03/17/2007 04:43 am
Okay. That was not nice. I like it, and I want to read more, so post more. And no more cliffhangers, yeah? I suppose that's too much to ask for....LOL!
I'm oh so very sorry for leaving the story in suspense like that--that was a bit evil, wasn't? *unrepentant grin*

I'm glad that you like the story!