The Worst Betrayal by TwilightChild
Chapter: Games

05/08/2007 09:07 am
Great chapter

03/28/2007 11:59 pm
good read, thank you. be interesting to see what danaia's plan entails. really enjoyed red's "“But…hey!”

03/27/2007 01:40 pm
Of course they would use Buffy's image to help break him. Poor thing, so confused. That gave me a giggle, Willow had to leave too because she was gay, does that mean she can oogle Spike? Can't wait to find out what are Danaia plans and why she is helping? Really enjoying this, thanks.

03/27/2007 09:26 am
Good update

03/27/2007 06:27 am
Nice chapter, loved Willows comment at the end.

03/27/2007 05:25 am
As always, so glad to see a new chapter of this fic. You totally deserve your nomination -- in fact, I think you deserve lots of them. Nice to get a bit of POV from Spike. As expected, he's been tormented with visions of Buffy. I'm glad the real thing seems to be able to cross that barrier -- at least a bit. There needs to be some thread of connection if Spike is to make it back.

03/27/2007 02:01 am
I'm relieved Willow is there. Now they might stand a chance. Glad Buffy is really understanding what she did to Spike, what he has suffered. Glad she has made herself pretty clear to she needs to make it doubly clear how important "that slave" is to her specifically.

Not sure how I feel about Danaia's plan. She seems to care about her sister (or sisters) and have no real compassion for the other slaves and that troubles me more than a bit.

Concerned about daddy demon and the brothers grim.....they are likely plotting against the good guys knowing the jig is up for their plan.

I am delighted to read updates on terrible and yet wonderfully written.


03/27/2007 12:49 am
I was just thinking about this story the other day, so glad to see it updated.

Poor Spike, it's going to take time for him to trust anyone and to know that he's safe now.

lol, loved this bit: Xander suddenly appeared again, grabbing Willow’s arm firmly. “You’re gay, you have to leave too!”

Great chapter!

03/27/2007 12:21 am
hey hun! dreamsofspike pointed me to this lil masterpiece and im now officially glued to it!! its brilliant and OMG poooooor spike!! i wanna pick him up and huggle him to bits!

more soon pleeeeeaaaaasseeeee!! hee!
Welcome to the madness. <.< >.>

03/26/2007 11:37 pm
Xander really needs to get out more!

03/26/2007 11:29 pm
Wow, that was all sweet and moving - and then you had me cracking up with Xander and Willow! Great job on both accounts, and skillful shift in tone.

03/26/2007 10:36 pm
love the last scene, with xander and willow "you're gay, you have to leave too!!!" lolol...too funny...and a nice contrast to the darkness of the rest of the chapter, very nice work