not a positive beginning for our hero. excellent first chapter, thank you.

*hops up and down shouting* WHYYYYY do you have to keep hurting my Spikey-poo??!!

Wow. Sounds like you two are gonna be pretty rough on the lad. Nice, NFA battle!

Man, I have a feeling this is gonna get brutal...

This looks great and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Very worried about what will happen to Spike though... ;)

So is this a collaboration between Twilight Child and Dreams of Spike? Oh my gosh, the angst level couldn't get any higher. I'm trusting a happy (though long time coming) Spuffy ending? Please?

Awesome battle, Twilight.

I read on your website last night, DoS, but I didn't have time to leave a comment. With you two ladies collaborating, I'm sure the rest of this story will be as good as this first chapter. Although, you both are a bit heavy on the angst, but I'll try to hang on 'till the end. I'm sure it will be worth it :)

Great start, ladies! I'm intrigued by the idea of the demons capturing Spike. I guess it never occurred to me that the demon army might contain sentient demons. *shrugs* Maybe you're just more clever than me. ;)