and it is getting more scary for our favorite vampire. so is this gong to be a long and painful incarceration or a short painful incarceration? very good read, thank you.

"We're surrounded by perverts." "They're all over the place!" - That just happened to be yelled on South Park just as I was reading this, lol... seemed profound timing!

Eeeeeeekkkkkkkk! Poor Spike never gets a break...

I know its going to get worse before it can get better,, but promise me,, it will get better at some point right?? right??

Whoa, that's... dark.

Though, what else would I expect from the two of you? :P This is definitely gonna be one of those stories where I cringe throughout the entire thing, isn't it?

I'm loving this story! My poor Spike! Anxiously awaiting the next chappie!!

I'm really enjoying this story, although at the same time I find myself mentally cringing at what Spike's going through--and it sounds like it's going to get a lot worse before it gets better! Will Buffy find out somehow and try to rescue him at some point? How will she (or anybody) find him if he gets taken to another dimension? More soon, please!

I may have to read this through my fingers . Poor Spike.

i really like this. hope you write more soon.

Hmmm... yeah, I have a feeling this story is going wind up scaring me for life. Still, I like the pace you too have established. Good work!

I'm hoping Spike uses his brain -- this is going to be horrendous. He needs self-hypnosis or something. God he's had some tough times in fics lately and this one is going to be a doozy!

Oh this is bad, very bad! I have visions of Buffy finding out about the battle and wasting time mourning her precious Angel while Spike is tortured and raped....grrrrr arghhhh.

His courage and mouthiness may do more harm than good this time.

Interesting that these demons are not really connected to W&H except for on hire.....hum.......this will be quite interesting.

Excellent update.

Kathleen