A little creepy picking up little girls off the street, Spike. Hope Carrie is creepy too.

Very odd, is she a seer? Sounds like Dana, receiving the thoughts of the past slayers including Buffy. Is that why she remembers him and loves him? Very interesting, can't wait to get caught up, thanks.

now that you have our attention, please continue. very good beginning, thank you.

hmmm...very intriguing start....do they know each other from before i wonder, or is this first meeting? it's a bit hard to say -- is that intentional? anyway, i'm already fascinated :) off to read more :)

great start.very differnt. can't wait for more.

Intriguing beginning. Of course I thought you were writing Buffy at first, but I suppose that was your intent.