Love's Bitch by Eowyn315
Chapter: Overflowing with Normalness

05/20/2007 07:38 am
Well, at least Spike's being a little more firm about it this time. She can't just give him time when its convenient for her. She still thinks of him as less than a person, which is why she'd never currently consider being with him. But its good to know it at least stings when he doesn't play along. Very sad, but touching ending to the chapter.
Thank you - it's a long, slow process for them to both be in a position where they can be together, but they're taking baby steps in the right direction.

Lou
04/08/2007 01:25 pm
If she had two brain cells she'd realise what's up with him. Spike should just leave her to her happy life -- see how that goes for her.
If Spike left her to it, who knows how long she'd be oblivious?

04/07/2007 05:58 pm
from insight to advoidance in moments, so buffy. is she the kid sister? thanks for the fun read. enjoy spike and dawn.
Sometimes we forget that Buffy's only 20 - she is practically still a kid. I was that dumb at 20...

Thanks for the review!

04/06/2007 09:50 pm
Well that was just stupid on her part. She knows that he's in love with her. Does she think he's her bestest girlfriend and do each others hair and talk about boys and giggle? Maybe it's time Spike looked for some one too. Hate to see either of them with other people but it might send a message to her as well. Great read, thanks.
Buffy is pretty inconsiderate, but I don't think Spike's gonna be able to date someone else that easily. He is, after all, love's bitch. Glad you're enjoying the story.

04/05/2007 03:23 am
very good read, thank you. buffy is either so dense that nothing spike says or does penetrates, or as unconcerned about anyone but herself as the rest of the scoobies.
I think maybe it's a little of both... Thanks for reviewing!

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 07:27 pm
Buffy using Spike for muscle as usual toward the end. That's sad.

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 07:27 pm
Buffy using Spike for muscle as usual toward the end. That's sad.
It is sad - but at least instead of using him for sex, she's using him to protect Dawn. And you *know* Dawn's gonna be doing her best to get them together. :) Thanks for the review!

Mark Evans
04/03/2007 11:02 pm
Poor Buffy, she just has no clue. You can't tell a guy who loves you about your date with another guy, and expect him to be okay with it.
She's not the greatest with guys, is she? Hopefully, she'll get a clue or two. ;)

fangfaceandrea
04/03/2007 09:26 pm
wow. we girls can be really dense we we wnat to huh?
Denial is a beautiful thing... ;)

04/03/2007 08:38 pm
Is she an idiot? He TOLD her how he felt about her before she died! How does she THINK he'd feel hearing about the nice normal boyfriend and her jollies with him? She needs a swift slap for her lack of consideration. Maybe Dawn should deliver it with a wake up call.

Excellent update....poor Spike, I cringe for him. He's right, she's all about the using of him and discarding him before he gets any of his needs met.

Kathleen
Well, in her defense, she *was* chained to a wall and being threatened with Drusilla killing her when he told her he loved her...

Despite all that went on between them, I don't think he said it again - the night she died was more "I appreciate your respect" and "I'll die for you" - which I guess is kinda the same, but not.

Anyway, I think Buffy just doesn't know how to be friends with a guy who's in love with her. She kind of fueled Xander's Angel hatred by ignoring the fact that Xander had a crush on her, and she and Angel were *terrible* at being friends in season 3.

04/03/2007 07:07 pm
not that she doesn't deserve that, because she totally does, but i feel a bit bad for the girl, cause she really was trying...i have a feeling that "just friends" isn't going to work out for those two :P lol...jacob's got guts, at least, he tried to help her fight them,and wants to see her again...so although i want him out of the picture for spuffy's sake, i hope it's not in a violent or bloody way :P great chapter, love :)
She is really trying, which means that, even though she may not love him, they're both able to hurt each other (emotionally, at least).

Hehe, I think Jacob's kinda great. It almost makes me conflicted about ditching him for Spuffy. (I said *almost* - please don't come after me with pitchforks.)

Thanks for the review!

PyroChilde
04/03/2007 05:04 pm
Aw, she's kinda dense sometimes but she's trying. I feel bad for her now.
Aww.. well, it's nice of you to feel bad, instead of wanting to beat her over the head. :)

04/03/2007 03:59 pm
She has to know that he is hurt that she went out on a date and evidently enjoyed herself. I am glad that he was there to help her.
Spike never fails to pop up when he's needed... and the poor guy suffers for it. Thanks for reviewing!

04/03/2007 03:12 pm
Oh, I like this. Stupid Buffy - can we assume she might be getting a tiny clue? :)
Heh, maybe a teensy, tiny one. ;) Thanks for the review!

smlcspike
04/03/2007 12:44 pm
Oh Spike, how could you hurt her like that, all she wanted was friendship and maybe trying to tell her feelings for him, explain things and he ruins it.
Wow, I think you're the only one on Buffy's side! :) Honestly, I feel bad for *both* of them - they can't seem to be honest and open with each other, and they just keep hurting each other. Something's gotta give.

04/03/2007 10:57 am
Can't say I blame Spike for his behaviour, it's totally understandable when Buffy shows up and begins talking about the guy she's dating. She knows Spike loves her, but to me it seems like she's pretending he doesn't.
Maybe she is pretending - or being Denial Buffy and convincing herself it doesn't matter. After being faced repeatedly with his loyalty, she's feeling guilty over how she treated him before. But she's not ready to love him, so she's going to force him into the "friend" mold, regardless of whether he can fit.

Deb
04/03/2007 10:17 am
Ouch. I read once that you should never make someone your priority, if they only consider you their option. Maybe Buffy will miss him enough to seek him out truly.
Wow, that's an awesome piece of advice. So true, and pretty much sums up the way Spike *always* is about his women (except sometimes they don't even consider him an option! poor guy).

kim
04/03/2007 09:42 am
Duh, Buffy! You know the man has feelings for you, and you're confused that he's hurt you're dating someone else?! God, she has no sensitivity whatsoever.

Poor Spike...I don't blame him for being upset when she's this obtuse.
You know, Buffy? Not too bright. But if she keeps doing it, I don't think Spike will take it for very long...

zanthinegirl
04/03/2007 09:16 am
This is really wonderful! Very believable and nuanced characterizations here; Spike in particular is nicely drawn. I adore Spike, but this version seems much more three dimensional than I'm used to seeing in fic.

Nice job with Buffy too. I don't find it hard to believe that she's still not comfortable with Spike as a romantic interest, but I suspect she'll get there.

And I like Jacob. I don't think he's the right guy long-term for Buffy, but I also think things between our favorite couple would go better if she figures that out for herself!
Thank you! I really appreciate your compliments about characterization - it's really the central point of my writing, so it's nice to hear I'm doing it well.

And I'm glad you like Jacob! I worried that Spike devotion would make people hate him on principle. But I really wanted him to be the nice guy - kind of what Riley might have been like if he hadn't been a secret military guy (and also a big dud).

04/03/2007 08:35 am
Oh, poor Spike, to have to listen to her talk about her date. Still, I suppose your version of Buffy is being kinder to Spike than Joss' version. I'm definitely intrigued to find out where you're going with this.
Well, it'd be difficult to *not* be kinder, considering Joss's Buffy used him for sex and punched him in the face a lot. But that doesn't mean it'll hurt any less.

jane
04/03/2007 08:32 am
Stupid Buffy, maybe Dawn will give her a heads up.
Let's hope someone does!

LadyYashka
04/03/2007 07:01 am
Buffy, Buffy, Buffy... :sigh:
You do not talk to the guy who is in love with you about the guy you're dating. She should know this stuff. Poor Spike.
Great update and I'm still wishing for a demon to scare Jacob off and knock some sense into Buffy.
Hehe, sorry Lady, but I guess Jacob's harder to scare off than you hoped. But look on the bright side - knowing Buffy's track record, he's probably evil. ;)

dicecanntcry
04/03/2007 06:41 am
Ah yes.

Stupid Buffy + Stupid Spike = meant to be, TRUE LOVE! haha.
Ha! That's some stellar math. Can't argue with that equation.

Tamara
04/03/2007 06:18 am
Does she really not get how much she's hurting him? I don't blame him for his behavior, he has every right to be mad.I wanna smack her good.
Yeah, I think she really doesn't get it. It may seem like common sense - don't talk about the guy you're dating with the guy that's in love with you - but I think Buffy still has trouble grasping the whole "Spike is in love with me" concept.

04/03/2007 06:13 am
Okay, time to break out the clue-by-four, because Buffy certainly needs one.
Hah... I did hit her with a two-by-four in the last story... maybe I knocked the sense *out* of her instead.