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Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Twelve
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06/08/2010 07:33 am
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05/09/2007 03:42 am
i like the Jess stuff, but it reads like he's a teenager rather than a man in his late 20's...
Thanks for the feedback. I wanted it to come off like part of him is stuck in the past; unfortunately it sounds like it came off like all of him is stuck :)
04/18/2007 06:56 am
surprisingly jess is becoming a very sympathetic character. and actually enjoying xander in a tale, witchcraft. thanks for the fine read, witch.
Thanks. You know how I love Xander. And I felt I needed to tell Jess's side of the story here. He's not just some cuckoo Spike-basher. Spike was a hero to him, a hero who really let him down. It's a tough situation.
04/18/2007 04:39 am
Love this story - looking forward to seeing it unfold.
Thank you! I'm a bit stuck at present, but there will be more.
dark amia
04/17/2007 10:49 pm
4 slayers? hmmm...
great chap!
great chap!
Thanks!
04/17/2007 10:13 pm
4th slayer? Wait - what??
I liked that Xander accepted Buffy + Spike.
I liked that Xander accepted Buffy + Spike.
Thanks. More to come. Eventually.
hotlipedjen
04/17/2007 09:31 pm
Ohhhhhhh!!!! Evil!!!
Mwa ha ha.
Lou
04/17/2007 08:53 pm
Lots of delicious plot development. It seems Willow had been up to no good for quite some time but is she behind the throngs of baddies? Can't wait for more.
Thanks! Yep, I threw in a mention of the car thing several chapters back. Willow's been up to this sort of thing for a while. Now she thinks she has the chance to really change the world...
Tamara
04/17/2007 07:19 pm
Comparing Spike's relationship with Tashi to her relationship with Giles is more apt .If it paralelled her relationshipwith Angel he'd be making out with her and spend at least part of the time being cryptic.
Thanks. I think Buffy came to that same conclusion as well :)
smlcspike
04/17/2007 06:50 pm
Oh I love it, 4 slayers how did that happen, So Buffy and Spike are progressing nicely, wonder how long till she moves in with him.
Thank you. There will eventually be more about the fourth slayer.
04/17/2007 06:14 pm
Oooo the plot thickens! What's up with Willow? We'll find out soon I am sure. Jesse needs to forgive himself AND Spike but he is so very young yet it makes sense that he hasn't.
Great update.
Kathleen
Great update.
Kathleen
Thanks. I wanted to show Jess's side of the story a little. He's not just some irrational Spike-hater.
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