Love's Bitch by Eowyn315
Chapter: Too Far

05/20/2007 09:49 am
Fantastic, and wonderfully done.
Thanks! I appreciate all the reviews. :)

05/07/2007 10:28 pm
At last!! God I hope this goes okay -- too soon for another total smackdown. They have a chance to sort things out here, if only they'd be honest with each other!
Glad you liked it! These two have had a rough time of it - it'll take a lot of sorting before they can really make it okay.

05/06/2007 05:51 am
As we all cheer! About time she figured it out. Had to have that conversation with herself and Dawn to put things into perspective. Great chapter, thanks.
Heh, I think this is the chap everyone's been waiting for. Glad you liked it.

05/06/2007 02:51 am
lovely read, thank you. a bit concern about dawn. great deal of conversation about her staying alone.
Thanks for the review!

smlcspike
05/05/2007 11:39 pm
Finally a kiss for Spike. PLease don't let her do what she did on the show.
Won't be quite like that...

05/05/2007 06:21 pm
ooh - I liked it! Great way for them to get together. A little dance, then...maybe they can talk this thing out.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

sour
05/05/2007 05:32 pm
great update, can't wait to read more
Thanks for the review!

B
05/05/2007 03:35 pm
Very nice chapter! Loved it (and the last few that I hadn't got round to reviewing.). And yay a Spuffy kiss! :)

Though I'm still worried about Dawn now. If Dawn gets captured/injured while Buffy is kissing Spike (and when she was stupid enough to leave her alone) that's only going to lead to guilt and badness! But maybe I'm being paranoid...(I blame Joss for that, you come to always look for the bad when something good happens!)

Anyhow, great chapter, great story, cannot wait for more. :)
Heh, everyone's all worried about Dawn. Just relax and enjoy the kissing. :) Thanks for the review!

05/05/2007 02:37 pm
I hope Buffy isn't a total bitch to Spike afterwards, like always.
Me too... but then, it is Buffy...

time of change
05/05/2007 02:09 pm
Wheeee!
That sounds like a good thing. :)

05/05/2007 08:47 am
Beware the power of Spike's lips and kisses. They will render the Slayer senseless, eventually!

Hehe, Buffy better watch out!

Dirktavian
05/05/2007 08:20 am
Very nicely done!! I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Too bad that Buffy isn't so good with the verbage, because the thoughts about the soul, and Angel, and how she wanted Spike to fight for her were so very bitter-sweet and moving. Loved the way she's all "Action Girl," telling Spike with her body and eyes what she can't with words. More soon, please!
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Buffy may not be good with the words, but she gets her message across... :)

Tamara
05/05/2007 05:24 am
She came this close to dealing with her Angel issues.
Yeah, she's close... I think she's doing pretty well, all things considered.

Emily
05/05/2007 04:18 am
Hee! =D
Smoochies'll do that to ya... ;)

infinitecrisis
05/05/2007 03:42 am
uh oh, kissing might lead to no good. more deny, more fighting, more battery and such. too fast physical connection without emotional always leads to no good. however, more story to tell. i'm hoping spike not going to run his mouth off with "join the dark" "creature of of the dark" etc.. keep going, great chapter.
Well, kissing can lead to no good, but this Buffy and Spike are a little different from the show, so I think they're looking at a different road. Thanks for the review!

05/05/2007 03:06 am
Would it be bad to say that my first thought after reading the last of this chapter was "Oh Lord, she's going to break his heart."

Then again, knowing you things are not about to go smoothly. :P

Great update, and I'm looking forward to the next.
Knowing me... Well, you're not wrong. *ducks*

FANGFACEANDREA
05/05/2007 02:51 am
FINALY! ;D
Yep. :) Think it was time?

05/05/2007 02:48 am
wow...thatta girl, buffy :) i'm grinning so big right now, so happy about the way that played out...i think talking to dawn about it kind of helped her put it in perspective... :P great chapter, love :)
Thanks! Glad I could put a smile on your face... I have the feeling this chapter made a lot of people happy. :)

zanthinegirl
05/05/2007 02:35 am
Heh, I suspected that kiss was coming soon!

Nice to see Buffy being more honest with herself, though I doubt she's completely resolved things in her own head quite yet!

Nice look at Spike; very credible motivations & actions.

Really enjoying this story!
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. I figured y'all deserved a nice kiss. :)

hellbound
05/05/2007 02:05 am
Pretty pretty chapter. And, no, not just for kissing. The whole thing was really well written. Its one of the very best views of Buffy-thought I've read.

Of course, now I'm terrified you've decided to dangle that tasty looking carrot a little closer, and maybe with some ranch, but its still just out of reach.
Wow, thanks, hellbound! I appreciate the sweet review.

Oh, and about that carrot thing? Uh... here, have some dip... *runs away*

05/05/2007 01:52 am
THIS was a perfect payoff....a perfect chapter. They are both so very in character (Dawn too). Buffy FINALLY seeing her own heart and even dancing on the edge of her Angel issues just in time. Spike standing up for himself and underlining Buffy's new realization by making her realize he might just have limits after all. Excellent all round.

Kathleen
I think it'll take a while for her to really get over the Angel issues, but it's a step in the right direction...

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it!

Pam S
05/05/2007 01:30 am
Make up your mind Buffy...
She's trying...

kim
05/05/2007 01:28 am
Okay, so she gave into the attraction after a good slaying......but will she run when the adrenaline wears off? She's still been living in fear too much.

Gotta love teenage loyalty. :)
That remains to be seen, doesn't it?

05/05/2007 12:24 am
Happy day, happy day, happy happy happy day. Can't wait to see the ensuing kissage!
Hmm, might you be happy about this latest development? ;)

Mark Evans
05/05/2007 12:01 am
What an ending, lol. Thanks for the wonderful chapter. I'm sure you've made many people happy today :D .
Oh, I'm sure... I think this is what people have been waiting for. :) Thanks for the review!