Finding William Pratt by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 4: Morning Glory

loveless
08/15/2009 11:39 am
that was amazing, i luv the way you write. im looking forward to reading the third installment

01/30/2008 02:01 pm
"As she left the room without a backwards glance,she missed one very important detail.
Spike watched her go."

I was done here. It...I don't know,it saddened me,and I loved it! You're great!

And,yeah,I want a happy Spuffy ending,please;)

Kelsey
12/28/2007 06:55 am
This is an awesome fic! i cant wait till i read the third

anon
12/11/2007 07:34 am
jesus christ that was hot.

Serenity
09/14/2007 06:49 am
Oh thank GOD! I am so happy to hear that there will be another installment. This one was just as tantalizing as the first. Can't wait!
Hey, thanks! Installment #3 is up - at least the first chapter. Glad you enjoyed.

Paula
09/06/2007 01:14 am
Really well written!!!and I loved the characterization of both Buffy and Spike. Please, tell me you'll start posting the third part soon!
Thanks - and I'm working on the third part, promise. Just having Muse issues ...

Cas
08/26/2007 05:07 am
Terrific ending. But when's the sequel coming? Please!
I'm working on it, promise! Since I want Spike to stay fangy and unchipped and somewhat unapologetic about his killing ways, well ... let's just say he's giving me a hard time about the happy ending I keep pushing on him. Buffy isn't happy with him either, but I hope to bring them both around in the next few weeks. ;)

Brunettepet
07/13/2007 02:07 am
This was a stellar sequel finding a mature, centered Buffy at a strong place in her life. The menace of the string of brutal killings was an excellent background to illuminate this Spike really is evil, even though he's playing nice. The photography session was a beautifully choreographed seduction. This was a richly detailed, emotionally weighty piece, and I'm looking forward to how you're planning to follow it up.

idk5743228
06/13/2007 02:25 pm
I thought it was the perfect ending. That was the only choice this edgier Buffy would make. Hope your start posting the final installment soon, I can't wait. As always, you're GREAT!!

sarah g
06/10/2007 10:58 pm
OMFG I CANT BELIEVE THAT SHE LEFT HIM!!!! i was so happy that they found each other again and then she goes and leaves him. i love this story and am so glad that i read it. i cant believe that they keep leaving each other and that theyre not together, theyre meant to be together. i really hope that in the next story the find each other and actually stay together. please, please,please wriet the next installement as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next between them and i hope that he follows her and they get together and stay happy. thanx soooooo much, youre amazing

06/03/2007 08:13 am
Bloody hell.

This has got to be my favorite fic ever.

I love you!
Thanks, DMW! That's high praise. Glad you enjoyed.

Deb
06/01/2007 04:55 am
Fascinating take on an au plot. Spike is so bad and yet sooo good. Fun writing for you and great read for us.

05/25/2007 05:03 pm
It really is fitting that Buffy was the one to leave this time around. They have come full circle right now. But she has her pictures, tattoo and now the new marks to remember this trip. Awesome story. Wonder what changes will we see in Buffy now. Can't wait for the final installment.

05/24/2007 03:38 pm
Very cruel. I really want to see that eventual happy ending.

And yay Buffy for leaving.

Shanna
05/24/2007 04:59 am
Absolutely love this story. Good to know that there will be a sequel... along one hopefully. I look forward to some more convo btween the two so w get to know Spike better.
Hey, thanks! And I'm toying around with how to frame the sequel right now, but there will absolutely be more of Spike's backstory.

Dee
05/24/2007 03:52 am
This stuff is what great fanfiction is made of. I love this version of Spike and Buffy! Can't wait for the grand finale.
Thanks, Dee - that's high praise! *Blushes.* I'm looking forward to writing the finale, too.

kim
05/24/2007 03:33 am
You know, you could totally make this an original story some day and publish it as a small series.
Thanks, Kim! I appreciate the confidence.

Demonica Mills
05/24/2007 03:13 am
I am very much looking forward to the third story!
Thanks, DM! Glad you're enjoying it.

Carole
05/24/2007 02:37 am
Good God, I'm speechless. You racket up the tension with every chapter. What did he ink on her? What was he thinking when she left? What you don't show is as fascinating as what you do. Such a good story.
Thanks, Carole! I spent hours deciding on the tattoo ... and then a few more hours deciding that I couldn't reveal that detail just yet. ;)

Christine
05/24/2007 12:36 am
I'm glad to hear there's another installment, I'm completely addicted to this series.
Addicted? Wow, thanks. I'm having a great time writing it, so I'm thrilled to know that it is just as much fun to read.

pretty_in_fangs
05/24/2007 12:07 am
Whew. I feel like I was holding my breath for the entire chapter. I so adore this story. You give it such life.
Thanks, pretty! Glad you enjoyed. And I keep meaning to say - I *love* your penname - pretty_in_fangs is oh-so-clever.

nichbuket
05/23/2007 11:27 pm
Dang. I do love this series. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Glad you're enjoying!

05/23/2007 10:55 pm
LOL - this was great,and a wonderful place to end it.
Thanks, slaymesoftly! Glad you enjoyed it.

PamS
05/23/2007 10:19 pm
Of course, only the insinuation
that he is the cause of the deaths of the blondes that look a lot like her. Could be someone else .. yeah right!!

Enjoying their little encounters.
Thanks, Pam! Glad you're enjoying.

ace
05/23/2007 09:54 pm
I like that she was strong enough to leave and knew that she should, as it wasn't the right time for them. Here's hoping the third time's the charm :-)
Thanks, Ace! I was afraid that would be a *terribly* unpopular move, but if Buffy really has grown up, well ...